All Comments on 'Unleashed'

Ewww.

Well written. Good twist.

But eww.

Great...until the last paragraph. To each their own...but a little warning about incest is nice. I wouldn't have read it had I known, totally turned me off.

Generally pretty good plot, well written...

The twist at the end was pretty shocking and a good one, but not my taste what so ever.

I figured they were related.

Your story was great until the twist in the end...I thought it was a brother. But this is the noncon/relt group and this is where it should be. And a drugged rape it is.

Your writing is fine and your idea, though I'm not crazy about it, was great. Love to read more from you. Excellent RP story.

Thank you

Its "INCEST/TABOO" . Foul.

Those of us that don't want to read about incest should have been warned about this perversion.

Perhaps it's in the wrong catagory, or should have had a disclaimer at the top; but for all of you who are shouting "sick" or "perverted", look at the top of the page. It's "Nonconsent". i.e. rape fantasies. How is this "pervertion" any better? so long as it's not reality who gives a fuck