All Comments on 'Unleashed Desires, Ageless Passions Ch. 04'

I'm anxious to see what happens to John's relationship with Jane. A loose canon a continent away sounds ominous; see previous spending habits! The revelation of the two failed marriages and the impending failure of the third truly humanizes the protagonist. Your background must have given you many glimpses of this type of individual. I await the next chapter.

Cheers,

Coaster

This is an amazing story. You have me totally hooked and involved. I just love the Rosie character. (Boo hiss to Sophia!) And what will become of Jane? Each chapter is better than the last for me although chapter 3 was pretty sensational too. The backdrop of the psychological narrative has real originality and you make it so accessible. You write beautifully. You should publish a book! I can't wait for chapter 5. Very well done and thank you.

Intelligent, warm and charming with great touches of humour! I hope there's more.

Magnifique!

Vous avez un grand intellect et une imagination sexuelle vivante. J'espère qu'il y a beaucoup plus de chapitres. J'aime votre écriture.

Sophie x

Warm and tender, yet sexy and very erotic. Just great!

This is getting Very deep, nearly depressing even, so many thoughts so many words,