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All Comments on 'Until the Sun God Don't Shine'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Not bad, I just feel like the brother/sister terms were a bit forced. Since we already know they are twins, it didn't need to be mentioned so much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
For the Sun God

This is a really good story i Love the use of chaning pov

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
If they are Asian...

... wouldn't that be taken as a given and not an oft-observed detail?

redlion75redlion75about 6 years ago
Uh

Was she mad raped or not

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"To revolt is a natural tendency of life. Even a worm turns against the foot that crushes it. In general, the vitality and relative dignity of an animal can be measured by the intensity of its instinct to revolt" Mikhail Bakunin