All Comments on 'Up Close & Personal Ch. 01'

Left me breathless ... waiting to see what was going to happen ... wondering what it was he forgot about ... someone coming home?

Was almost like reading MY own story...Waiting for the next chapter ....................

Don't stop now. We need the next level. Very titillating.

Very realistic! :)

It's written in such a way that I feel as if I could just walk into the story and find my way around.

Looking forward to seeing more of your work!

Please, more more more. :)

Worth the wait. Excellently written. I could almost taste her juices, and I definitely came with the guy.

inch by inch, watching and waiting for just the right moment!

I especially like the parts where she plays with, tastes, and shares her juices.