All Comments on 'Upwardly Mobile Pt. 01'

This author seems to want to be like MM, creating wimpy male characters and brain dead selfish wives.

Decent set-up for chapter two. She’s letting his imagination run wild.

What happened in the past, what the future will bring? Just the writer knows...so 2* for now

You’ve done an excellent job setting the stage. Two likable characters and an intriguing situation where literally anything can happen from this point forward. I can’t stop laughing at the folks who commented here. It’s like they read a different story! That Peter dude is seriously fucked in the head. You have to feel sorry for people like him.

so is this a swinging cuckold fantasy piece or is it a serious cheating wife story? not saying i mind if its a fantasy piece pretty much why this site is here but looking for the serious cheating wife stories. ur others look like swinging fantasy stories is why i didnt read them

Good start well written, nice slow build up, just the way I like it.

Keep the good work coming

You have a nice set up for chapter two but..... You never said why Rose and Bob were on second marriages. If infidelity was the reason for either then Rose is playing with fire. Just about every couple plays fantasy games in the sack but carrying outside the bedroom starts the to plant the idea that it is real. If she did have sex with Tony and Bill then she just ended her second marriage. if Bob haddn't stressed at least twice that he thought she was kidding then she is dumber than shit. If Bob is going to be getting off on this then he is dumber than shit. Take your pick.

And BayernPeter's comment gave me a pretty good indication that this could be an interesting story worth reading. (And it was. Thanks Pete.)

KingBandor's writing style I found to be very readable and clear. This first chapter has introduced the characters well and left me interested in what will happen in following episodes.

Lue

Ps: KB, I note that your biog note is not particularly informative. I find it interesting to know more about authors whose stories I like. I also note that you mention your own stories as your favourites.

Poor form, Your Majesty.

Point taken.

That I’d she did screw those other two guys, her marriage is over, because her husband said at least twice that he thought she was kidding. But what the husband didn’t ever say was no, you can’t, don’t do that. She teased him with a hall pass notion until they could get back together, and played along with it, not believing she’d do it, but he never said no.

In the meantime, he was seeing strippers, even if he never fucked any of them. He had a line he wouldn’t cross — and it was pretty smart of him, ‘cause fucking a stripper is always a risky move — versus her maybe, and maybe not, screwing her two coworkers. Then, they are both loyal and faithful when she gets to Dallas. His first move is to show her off in a thong bikini. I guess that the next chapter will have his boss trying to get into that thong.

The husband was encouraging all of this, yet giving her excuses if she did screw around.

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Agree with a few of the other comments... relationship wise. However, its a story and not sure its really about real life. Therefore, I find it more of a story that many don't really get the opportunity to enjoy. Minus a good read. To me that is exactly what this is. Enjoy your writings and look forward to more.

Playing with the fantasy of sharing but neither doing anything with it other than enhance their sex. Husband's a fool to start showing her off knowing about 'his philandering boss' without telling what he's like.

Fire...playing with...burnt..

Most of this part is a drivel with worn-out banalities in descriptions of sex and a hint of infidelity in the past, two pages for the intro. Ok for skimming through.

I hate cucks. 1 star & the end.

Bill S.