by TheEarl
The Earl - This was an amazing story. The emotional state of Elsie was exactly right. There was just the right amount of bondage and discipline for a first time encounter. The sex was more than hot. You've done so much more than just write a piece of erotica here. By the way... did you say you were soliciting marriage proposals? I'm not sure I'm the marrying kind, but I would consider a handfast ;-) Thank you so much for sharing this.
Obviously I'm more than a little biased here, but I still love this! I love it more everytime I read it! No marriage proposal from me though hun,'cos I'm fairly certian my boyfriend would object! Keep Smiling! Elsie xxx
Very very good writing, lad. You combine s/m and sweetness well, lovely scene and characters. Pear
I wish there were more of these kind of bondage stories on Lit. Caring people indulging in their partners kinks and finding some joy for themselves as well. Thanks.
This story sucked. I gave it A 1. Those who think I'm a jerk should give it a 5 just to spite me;)
I thought that was awesome.
Good for you. :)
Now, if you'll excuse me, I've got some business to attend to.... *Grin*
I'd love for you to spank me. Don't think that counts as a marriage proposal, but who knows ;-) I'm also into leather and pvc to, how about you? I'd love to tie you up, gag you, then make forbidden love to you all night long. What do you say to that?
Thanks for sending the link to this story. Enjoyed it immensely. You got talent.
The Earl!
Hahahaha! That ROCKS! That was just the right amount of SM/BD, affection, sex and tension for my tastes! Thanks so much. great imagery....hmmmm. I'll have to make some renderings.
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I just loved your story... It set my imagination off like wildfire... in fact I must attend to what you've done to me ;)
the object of story tags is for people to find stories about subjects they like.... your tags suit you only and that just plain dumb
Hey dude, do you use 4chan? Just wondering, it would be cool if you'd check it out if you don't know what it is. Also loving your stories, please, keep writing!