All Comments on 'Vacation'

To be frank, this story reads as a piece of mysoginistic trash. I unfortunately read the whole thing hoping that Max would get revenge in the end for the raping and slavery. But no, the author seemed to think that it's alright for rape, slavery, and the barbaric ideals of a truely idiotic society to flourish. Ah well, if anyone reads this and likes it, kinda clear that the phrase respect of BOTH sexes is far from their vocabulary.

Too many unanswered questions here.

If patrons of inter-dimensional travel go missing won't the company, their family, their friends start to wonder where they went? Why didn't they come back?

If the rabbit people are kidnapping travellers to create female breeding partners, eventually they will be discovered. Someone, family, police, insurance companies will send investigators and eventually the crime will be discovered.

This story works as a first chapter, but stretches credulity without a follow on chapter explaining how the rabbit people are getting away with their crimes.

Nevertheless the story was well written and proceeded at a good pace.

The characters and situation break immersion so much I want to punch my computer screen.

Brilliant 👏. Fun & imaginative. Deserves an overall better rating.