All Comments on 'Vacation Argument'

Can't see why she had to be such a total slut for strangers but not willing try new things for her husband. Now that she;s opended Pandoras box she's unlikely to keep it for hubby only.

Let me get this straight. She is a prude that holds back from her husband. He confronts her( not his best self) and she gets mad and gives another couple what she refuses to do with him. And he is fired up about it? Horns like an elephant's tusks and what a wimpy, loser. It's a wonder the writer didn't have the husband catch up with the three of them and clean them when they were done... I didn't see any warning about CUCK SHIT as usual. I give some CUCK writer some credit as they are proud on their decent into their emasculated lives.

5+ ~ A really hot story but,if she was my wife I’d divorce her cheating ass!!!

You left it unfinished. Four days of debauchery by his wife needed to be heard by her now-cuckold husband and us, the readers.

I would get her to have a pregnacy & std test , if positive ditch the bitch

TRUTH IS i WOULD BE PISSED OFF. MIGHT FORGIVE HER BUT WOULD HAVE TO GIVE IT A LOT OF THOUGHT. i WOULD HAVE TO KNOW WHY SHE SO QUICKLY TRIED ALL THE SLUTTY THINGS SHE SAID SHE DESPISED BUT WITH OTHER PEOPLE. IF SHE WAS ANGRY WITH ME HOW DOES THAT WARRANT WHAT SHE DID.

This is a great story. My wife gets six weeks of vacation a year to my three. So a couple times a year she will goon trips alone. These trips end up be a chance for her to enjoy all the wild and crazy sex she can. When she returns it fuels the fire in our bedroom for months as she tells me all the naughty details of her adventures. The best was when she was staying at a resort that catered to high end golfers. She ended up hooking up with a group of guys from Seattle. There were eight guys and she would actually ride along in their carts during the days gold outings. Giving blowjobs and discrete fucks off in the woods beside the course. At night she got all the dick she could handle.

A fun, very erotic story told well. You can tell how erotic it is by how worked up it’s gotten the little boys who feel all guilty and dirty. They have to talk about the characters being bad, and how they hope the woman suffers all sorts of evil things. So sad.

The husband in the story gets what he wanted, a wife who is sexually spirited. The wife discovers she can be the woman her husband wants—and enjoy the adventure. They both realize that they want each other. They’re in love, and the door is open for a more exciting future.

I really don’t understand people who read stories on an erotic story site and then post messages that say how much they hate sex and sexual people. I think their problems aren’t in the stories…

I'm unsure of your objective was in crafting these characters incorporated in this plot line. Neither character is portrayed in a compelling, attractive light. Their presented behaviors are thoroughly unattractive. Moreover, the provided comments by readers have registered a near-universal dislike of the entire story in all its parts. So what are we to make of the author's objective(s)? Perhaps to create a story that is universally disliked?

Not much love in this story, plus zero respect. Perhaps he should have packed his things up and gone home to complete the split. This woman is such a piece of shit. He should have sent the following text. “You obviously don’t love or care about me. Adios. I am flying home and seeking an attorney to complete what you started. Have a nice life. Goodbye “ instead of being a stupid weak jerk. There are three billion women in the world. Find one more suited to you than this evil bitch.

He should have given her thirty minutes to return and when she did not, called the airline, cancelled her return flight, her credit cards , checked out and flown home to start the divorce paperwork. Then she could stay there and fuck until she died from STDs

I agree with the negative comments. i stopped reading when she got into the cab. He's got a bigger pussy than she does, no matter what the story says about his cock. Reading her description of events was just nauseating. a terrible story about two terrible people. hope she got STD's and passes them to him.

She obviously got the message - maybe not the one hubby intended, but that's what can happen when you set out to deliberately hurt someone you're supposed to love.

A seriously erotic little tale.

LA

Well sorry I wasted the time to read this. She does stuff with others she wouldn't do with him. His sorry ass enjoys hearing about it after insulting her to begin with, and suddenly that wakes her up?? Only with others. With what he got pissed at in the beginning but okay with what she did makes no sense at all. Just an overall silly story.

Sorry ass cunt. He should have had the balls to confront her first thing then either dragged her ass out of the club or left and filled for a divorce.

Very silly. He only wants her to express emotions, to show interest, to react, anything! Instead of lying there thinking about her shopping list.

So she gets annoyed, disappears and does everything he wanted but with other men & women and expects him to take her back and he’s considering it ? Really ?

Apart from not knowing what diseases she’s brought back there’s the fact she’s been screwing everyone apart from her husband and he’s getting off on it ! What a pathetic little man.

What garbage .. he tries to get her to loose up.not fuck others and she takes off amd does with others what he wanted her to do with him .. cut the slut loose.

She gave everything to strangers while husband got the leftovers. He'd begged for years and didn't get one cherry.

I love this story as I can relate.. A few months before our wedding we had a huge fight. I took off with my buddies for the long weekend and she was pissed. She ended up getting together with a guy she works with and spent the entire weekend enjoying his big cock.in our bed.

Only one Question from me " did you do anything that wouldn't pass the husband test and give me cause to divorce you?

Hubby is a self-involved jerk. Too bad.

When your sex life is all about pushing the limits, you eventually run out of limits. Then you need to abandon the one who loves you and start fresh with someone new. They belong together and no one else should be burdened by them.

Cut her loose. She acts like a nun for her husband then, screws everyone else in town He didn't say he wanted her to have sex with others, just to open up sexually with him. Now she is just another slut. Kick her out and try again. There are better women out there.

her husband is the leader along with the cuckold Lovers guild, you know the ones who liked this crap.

Another cheating whore wife who deserves to burn with her wimpy cuck on the same fire.

Ist I would tell her to get herself checked for STDs, and also some can lay dormant for up to a year, therefore condoms will be used from now on between us, and tf she strays again, she will be TOAST. Also i now have a hall pass no argument, I'll take precautions. It will take a long time for me to forgive her.

Ignore the insecure trolls with anger issues. I’m sure IF they even have a significant other, the poor woman is terrified of them. This was phenomenal. Very well written, original and believable—tough to pull off in this genre. Bravo! I can’t wait to read the rest of your stuff. Thank you!

Pathetic little man. Controlling bitch. Pathetic author

Notenoughinyourhead

She is a controlling cold assed woman, and when husband finally can not deal with her behaviour and tells her so, she gets mad and leaves, starts playing with others men and women to hurt her husband. OK so she turned into a cheating slut and a bitch. Then she goes back to her husband and wants him to forgive without being told what she was playing at while gone. She gave away what he had been asking her for, for years. Got it- Tell her you forgive her ( no need to allow the hate and betrayal to harm him.) Tell her to go back to her lovers. The marriage is over. Just turn your back on the controlling, man hating bitch. Walk away and have a good life without her.

That was awful. Get pissed and cheat on the husband. Get rid of her!

She is so tight with him but then goes all out slut and he likes it? Just not real so I can't enjoy the story.

Too much long winded description and too little interaction.

Keep up the good work od explaining you sterile beta bitch boy fantasies.

Neither one of them act like grownups. Their communication skills rate a zero. But when she packs and leaves, she buries their marriage. It's one thing to tell her husband she's upset. It's another thing altogether to SHOW him by cheating, that she's a lying, cheating slut and doesn't worry about pregnancies or diseases. Her behavior ends their marriage. I don't think anyone would have even waited for her return. Just go home, file for a divorce and move on with your life. But the funniest part of this messy story? Were the comments. Whether you liked the story or hated it, the comments took on a personal nature when commentators attacked one another because they didn't like another persons comments. Really? No one else can have an opinion different than your own? That's too funny for words. What a bunch of morons!

I might try spending a vacation in this fashion. Good writing!

Any husband who lets out a blast of complaints about his wife's sexuality should consider himself very lucky if she only cuts him off and moves him to the guest bedroom. Smug bastard, thinking that he "won" that discussion. I'm not even going to address how weird a man is to actually *want* his wife to fuck outside of the marriage.

On the other hand, spent a lot of time trying to hurt him by ignoring the wedding vows. Unfortunately, she can't take back anything done while acting like a slut. Separate if you can, definitely cut him off, but remember that at some point the two of you need to talk (unless you decide that you've been hurt too bad and that divorce is the only solution).

She was a prude and hung up on things and it seemed she shut him out so he finally lets it fly and she goes and cheats .. WTF over . He was no saint but she came across as REALLY unlikable. . not a good resolution sorry but it was horrible. i cant see the point of the story at all. And another IDIOT husband keeps her. that right there earns my ire .

Since in the end it seems they agree that sexual thrills are important enough to allow them to ignore some pretty deep personal and relationship issues. Started cringe-ugly and ended with a shallow sex-enabled reconciliation scene.

About the best to be hoped for from the start. Dude thinks with his little dick, she has a new sex based self identity. Wow .

Not believable, she becomes a super slut and he becomes a stupid cuckold

Stupid!!! Hubby thinks its hot that wife whored her self out from anger?

This writer must be a complete freaking retard brainless to write something so stupid pathetic nonsense like this lame story.

Complete trash and waste of time.

What a trash!

1* for this crap.

That’s it... I’ve read two of your stories and this is the last !!!

Hey, if while writing these stories you have a serious need to go to the local gloryhole for a meal then fucking do it !!!!

Don’t bring your shit stories here for people to vomit over !

If I could give you a negative rating it would be a negative 10 !!!

So fuck you and stop writing... you’re wasting our time !!!

He was out of line with the extent and viciousness of his original comments to her. That being said, her reaction and actions went totally off the cliff. I (as the husband) would definitely know that life would be different from that point forward. Wondering anytime she was late getting home or had unexplained absences what she was up to. Her actions in response to his statements just drove one hell of a wedge into the relationship.

The doubts from her actions would probably eventually end most relationships. He wants to know and she (knowing what kind of light it would shine on her) only wants to tell what she wants to. Obviously she knows just how bad that she is going to look and if she wanted to inflict pain on him as he did on her, she should just “let it rip” and tell all she did.

I (as the husband) would wonder when one or more of the participants in her “adventures” would just happen to show back up in her life. That in itself would be more than I would want to deal with, especially since she only wants to mete out small amounts of information, doing damage control as she goes. Her new sexual openness would serve as a reminder of her revengeful actions and would always make me wonder who she had did it with first.

These two might make it, I don’t think I could due to the lengths and level of her actions in response to what he said. No, this was a cold and calculated response to inflict as much pain as possible on him. I would have to choose divorce, as I could no longer live with someone that I obviously knew so little about and wouldn’t want to live with someone who would act this way while married to me.

That's what these two immature babies needed and deserved. He should have never replied to her messages, enjoyed the rest of his vacation, gone home and filed for a divorce. What a horrible ending.

toomuchinmyhead

Tell me what was your motivation in how you characterised the wife in this tale? Did you anticipate that your readers would sympathise with her need to "get back" at husband? The worse thing was when you had the wife actually admitting that her husband was correct and that she sought his forgiveness for her behaving like a slut. The fucking idiot had been made a cuckold...and he just lapped up his newly acquired status. Ugh...I have to tell you after reading, my stomach felt the strong need to purge itself. This really was a cuckold fetish tale...just what Loving Wives needed as if there aren't too many of that genre already.

Great job. You hit the psychology right to create tension, the sex created moments to get you hard or wer, whichever is appropriate, and an interesting mix of emotions. I would like to have heard her other stories.

check your ego and split while the gettings good

the bitch deliberately slutted around to hurt him

seeing as she showed him no mercy when she did it, he should show her none in return

he needs to destroy the worthless cunt as viciously and completely as possible, then move on

Because we can"t give less. Leave the cheating slut there,go home and file for divorce.

Leave the cheating bitch on the island with her new found friends. Take ALL her stuff and go home. Get the divorce process started before she can even think clearly.

home is not where the hearts are, TK U MLJ LV NV

He should have left her there.

Would she have been okay if her husband had fucked the guy's wife while she did the deed ? Bit of a pointless story ----------

I want to know the other stories from her vacation. any plans to add to it and make it a series?

Where does all this self-righteousness come from? Your ideas are right and everyone else is wrong? What does that have to do with how this fictional story was written?

If it doesn't excite you, move on. Why are you reading LW anyway? I found this an exciting buildup and telling of what happened between a husband and a wife. Nuff said.

This story, although relating extreme circumstances, is one of the more believable stories on this site. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. Get over it guys, a woman can always find sex partners, and in this case, she's apparently pretty, so she'd find them more easily. Still, it's just a story, and it's told with his angst at her leaving him, on some level justifiable at that point, and then with great eroticism when she returns. Then the author leaves us with her having been apparently even wilder during the rest of the week, with the details being left for the reader to ponder. It's now up to the husband to take back the cheating bitch that he partially created, or not to take her back. Great story!

Out the fucking door, no excuses

So after all these years of frustration he decides that at the start of their vacation would be a good time to unload on her? Probably poor timing. But I never heard him say he wanted her to turn into a complete slut and expose herself to every disease known to man. At that point, why would he take her back? She has shown him by her actions what little love or respect she has for him. That all by itself seemed a strange reaction to his tirade. Turn herself into a slut? After all those years of being a plain Jane? Hardly likely. This whole mess just didn't read well. I just don't see it happening this way and the ending was simply dumb. Not well told.

He suffers her frigidity for years and then can't hold back. She gets pouty and runs off to do things he wanted her to do with him. That's not right. He deserves his free time away from her and explore his sexuality and then can return to her....even. Sort of.

This guy does not want a wife to love and respect. He wants a woman to be a slutty actor in his fantasies of her with others. She did not seem to be very concerned that she might lose her husband, which probably means she does not care, now that she has discovered what the world has to offer.

He should be angry that she spread her wings with others and instead is just eating it up. After going out again and again in the future and coming back and telling him about it, she will lose any remaining respect for him. And her frequency of going out will increase to a point where she is away too much for his taste. This marriage is toast.

Congrats. Good story. Four out of five. It was well written, but a bit conventional for this genre. He wanted her to be more adventurous sexually and her response was to go out and do it without him. You know the old saying - if I'm in the room it's not cheating but if I'm not in the room it is cheating. There was nothing in his initial tirade that said he wanted her to do stuff without him.

Having said that the the where he thinks he sees her in the nightclub but isn't sure was extremely well crafted.

I think it would have been far more interesting a story if they both felt regret and remorse for what happened after the fact and then tried to forgive each other. But that is just me. I'm sure some people like this kind of straight up wife watching, er, wife listening story. more power to them. I don;t judge. Cheers. Steve

you could even get a wife to stay and we know why you're a nasty asshole. I gave this a 5

But the conclusion and the fantasy turned reality seemed strained. They have a fight, she packs her bags and leaves. On their vacation no less. So that's strike one. She has no control over her emotions? She behaves like a child and runs off. Apparently following her pattern of avoiding confrontation over things she is unwilling to discuss. And she stays gone their entire vacation. Strike two. This is the behavior you expect from an adult? Someone you're supposed to love and respect? I don't think so. Now at BTB man would have gotten on the phone and immediately cancelled all the credit cards, moved the bank funds into a new account she couldn't get at, then cancelled their cell phones and gotten himself a new one, gone home and packed her stuff into garbage bags. By the time she found her way home he would have started the divorce papers. BTB. But he stuck around only to find out that she has decided to punish him for telling her, albeit harshly, how he felt about their love life. Strike three. She's cheated on their marriage. She has clearly demonstrated her lack of love or respect for him and possibly exposed herself and him to every disease known to man. How you reach your conclusion that he would accept her behavior is beyond me. The ending of this story ruined the entire story for me. Even for fiction his willingness to stay married to a cheating slut was ludicrous. It simply made no sense.

He must dump the pig. He wanted to do the things with her and enjoy his wife sexually. Grow and explore each other, instead she went away on her own on vacation and fucked others , acted how he wanted her to act with him . Revenge stories are not always nessacerry but he should have left where ever they were and gone home to start the divorce so when he found out about what she had done he would be ready to end his marriage to this selfish slut. There is no forgiving what she did and the STDs she could have brought back with her

Your writing is quite good & this plot had real potential, but, to me you failed to do justice to it properly. I've read 3 of your stories so far & haven't really enjoyed any of them that much, you seem to like to create a hero who is into watching or hearing about his wife cheating with others of both sexes. Whilst I'm not against people enjoying themselves however they wish that fantasy does nothing for me; tried it once against my better judgement & it ended in disaster & tears. So sorry I could only score this 3 ***

I'd LOVE to read the rest of his wife's exploits!!! PLEASE, write a few more chapters to finish this one up!!!

Excellent setup, great pacing, and a fantastic plot. Thanks for sharing.

Hot as fuck 5*

Another troll bait story. 1 star.

...not worth mentioning. Your Pseudonym stinks - actually, it should be the direct opposite. Replace "Toomuch" with "Notmuch".

Please keep it there.

She couldn't wait to fuck other men. He should have just left her there to find her own way home. Divorce will be the only option. And while I appreciate the change of venue, this story was like so many others. But it lacked any new or interesting element. A solid "1".

He wasn't an ass for unloading on her, just stupid timing and they were there to enjoy each other!

Her reaction to leave was somewhat typical of how you indicated their life and her character was. Her deciding to check into another hotel and determined to just have space, time and relax, have fun was the first indication that there was no marriage here. Maybe, there was a marriage but for whatever reason she wasn't on the same page as him.

Do I criticize her - NO! She cut loose, something she really didn't want to be part of her married life and I doubt she ever even considered what she was wandering into, just that the more she did, the more she enjoyed it.

Love her husband, well - it was her husband, he was convenient, they're married and she is now all alone so...

He accepts her conduct and gets off on the new her but, guess what - the new her is going to be antsy and eventually active once they get home and being a woman, a woman he wants and loves, she will slowly get him to accept her playing a bit...a bit and then - 'Hello Cuckold'!!!

Thanks for the story, this guys life is about to change - drastically - and the wife - happily and sensually ecstatic!

She should tell him all the them women she had sex with and tell him were to find them them so he can have. Sex with them for 5 days while she goes back home now that's a great payback to his slut wife.

Nice start. Would like to hear the other stories. Although this story is kind of unbelievable, I enjoyed it. I just can't see a husband being okay with this. He didn't display a cuckold's personality in the beginning of the story. She goes off the rails and gives some strangers everything that she denied him over the years and he is like, "Oh baby, tell me more!" With the personality in the beginning of the story, I just don't see his ego being okay with that. Especially being behind his back. I really see him leaving her and being the BTB type of guy. That being said, it is still an entertaining story.

Pathetic at best, and in reality this fag author needs to complete a self-inflicted brain transplant with the nearness tranny-fag.

Maybe the location is changed by being in a vacation location, but at the end, she's a whore. Time to go home and divorce her. And sure as hell don't sleep with her. You never know what diseases the slut has.

But given the uptight wife I don't really see her going that far off the rails. Maybe she's making these stories up? I really felt with your setup, one or the other of them would have left and gone home. To an attorney. To file for divorce. He may have wanted his wife to loosen up a little in their bedroom, but I don't think he wanted her to turn into a slut overnight, bringing home whatever diseases she may have picked up. Don't like the odds for this marriage to last long.

I love stories like this!!! Can't wait for part 2!!!!

Your love for cum-slurping wimpiness seems to indicate you are.

Loved the story hope you plan on another chpater

very erotic and entertaining. some commenters simply aren't going to be satisfied unless there's a healthy dose of misogyny. Don't worry about those jerks. Keep writing.

You told me up front yo not waste my time on your stories. It is appreciated.

I enjoyed the read. Parts were slow, but they added to the story. The text was interesting and his reaction understandable.

Keep writing.

Too much details. Too drawn out. Could not get past page 2.

You have captivated me with this story. Up until the indiscretions of the wife, you have described my wife to a "T". I hope there is a part II to this story because I cannot wait to hear what kind of slutty naughtiness she has been up too. Thank you for writing.

The want to be headshrinkers are out in force trying to analyze the anonymous comments. Get a life you fucking morons. Whatever anybody has to say about any story is their take on it, not yours. Who the fuck are you assholes anyway that think your opinion is the only one that counts. Idiots.Stop that fucking whining. Grow up.

FIRST...let us remember this is a FICTION site. (No matter what a preface may say, or how well an author paints a story so it seems real-life! FICTION...Even if parts may be based on real experiences!).

Second...what does Hubby want? The Hubby in THIS story (not me or some other reader) wants a much more sexually involved and adventuresome Sweetie! Are there other attributes he would also like? Maybe, but it sounds like many of those are ALREADY present in this woman he professes to LOVE. (A great LSD comment on 2MuchHead's need to document those better was Right On! Thanks!)

((Let us NOT forget he has loved her for years - and she reminded Hubby of HER love for him at her darkest moments! Probably not the 20 years one commenter invented, I was guessing about 5-8. Better details, again, 2Much!))

What does Hubby get? He gets back a Sweetie who still professes her love for him. AND one who has learned that what Hubby has wanted since they've been married is actually not JUST reasonable, but surprisingly delightful! Could Hubby have convinced her of this by talking her into it? Hasn't worked to date. By sending her to a sex therapist? Probably not, unless it had been HER idea, and THAT hadn't happened! No, he got her mad and she went out and took HERSELF through middle and late adolescence! Was that Hubby's secret and nefarious plan? I think we all see that he is NOWHERE nearly that smart!

Does Hubby seem unhappy with what he has gotten back from her 'walk-about?' Hubby seems delighted.

Am I happy by having read this tale? You bet!

5*

He screwed up but she ended the relationship.

Couldn't even read to the end. Nuff said.

When there is a glaring typo in the very first sentence it's time to move on to a different story.

There needs to be a chapter for each day she was gone.

You're a wild and crazy guy. Keep up the lunacy.

OH YEAH

I would not believe this story if it was told as a real life experience. The husband would not take out his frustration in such a harsh manner first day of vacation. He would not gloat after pushing his point trough, even after the wife left him. The transformation of the wife was too sudden to be believable for a women not able to even discuss these things.

But as a erotic short story it was very good, very well written, very hot and arousing; how she had to tell the events slowly, and her husbands reactions. I enjoyed it very much, and as there must have been more stories to tell from this week, I look forward to the continuation.

I cannot stop wandering about these anonymous people that read this kind of stories, even properly warned, and revels in harsh criticism. What makes them tick? They are perhaps drawn to these fantasies, have to read about it, feel guilty and takes it out on the author? For us others it is unnecessary noise, but it creats a negative atmosphere. Perhaps Literotica should do as Lushstories, and only allow registered users to comment?

This really couldn't happen with a woman of such beliefs if she really had them.

She is really a slut. If this story line should continue I hope hubby at least gets to find a couple of young chicks to fuck and come back to tell wifey.

Well he told her off for not doing things he wanted so she went out to learn them. He made it a bad time for himself by telling her off the way he did. She was upset at him. The fact is he should have gone to her at the club. He allso should have told her he was very upset at her for leaving. As to where they go from here lets have the next parts to the story. And lets have an open mind about it . Both my wife and I enjoyed the story and want the next parts

Look, The story was terrible. It was limper then the husbands dick. In all honesty, writing isn't your thing.

Novel twists and turns. I liked it 5* worth. Ignore and even the delete the shitty comments some people leave. They just wish they could fantasize and write so well.

Takes one to know one dick wad. As to the previous commenter, you did call this guy an author right? Well, not everybody agrees with you. When you write shit expect to get shit. End of story.

I think he clearly stated what it entailed. And yet so many haters read it anyway? Or did you just 1-bomb and spew? And so clever! And seriously, so many authors spend so much effort trying to post coherent stories with correct words and proofread to check spelling and auto-correct word subs, and some of you can't write ten words without a misspell or wrong word. I thought it was well written. And while the ending pushed the limits of believability, it's a STORY, not real life. Well, done, author.