All Comments on 'Vacation at Home'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
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Three weeks is a long time. Surely there are more excellent stories to tell as they must have gotten together a few more times.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Beer From England's Moor Country

"some moor beer" (Tee-hee)

Nice read.

Dark_StormDark_Stormabout 6 years ago
OK, but...

You kept switching from past to present tense and back again. It makes for a disjointed read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice job, good sex

You idiots it's not about the writing mechanics, it's about sex. Go back to your book clubs.

spankfunforspankfunforabout 6 years ago
Great Story!

The Build To The Climax, Including Wife's Permission, Was Awesome!

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