by oldebarrister
Three weeks is a long time. Surely there are more excellent stories to tell as they must have gotten together a few more times.
You kept switching from past to present tense and back again. It makes for a disjointed read.
You idiots it's not about the writing mechanics, it's about sex. Go back to your book clubs.
The Build To The Climax, Including Wife's Permission, Was Awesome!