by oldebarrister
The Build To The Climax, Including Wife's Permission, Was Awesome!
You idiots it's not about the writing mechanics, it's about sex. Go back to your book clubs.
You kept switching from past to present tense and back again. It makes for a disjointed read.
Three weeks is a long time. Surely there are more excellent stories to tell as they must have gotten together a few more times.