All Comments on 'Vacuum'

Liked it

Confused for sure, story was all over the place.

Desceiptions were shite and it was rushed

2* is all i give it

A little slow. If you do another chapter it might help

A slightly unusual writing style for this site that is both unique and most pleasing to the eye and mind. Tip O hat Nils Huim.

No proper introduction of characters!

Keeping the mystery of their relationship worked for me. I would almost class this under humor.

Keep writing. You have a nice feel for holding attention. Don't listen to those who just want a quick jump into the sex.

I'd give six stars if I could.