by kitty_siam
I enjoyed the detail in the fight.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Dear Anonymous,
This is the way I write, if you do not like it... stop reading my stories. Perhaps you would enjoy something else... like a comic book with lots of pictures?
Anonymous complaints suck,
~ Kitty ~
The fight scene was nice but too detailed
The rest was just a lot of inderect exposition that doesnt innvolve me as a reader
I totally enjoy your work. It is detailed and realistic. The references to current day culture are perfection
Thanks for sharing your imagination and story telling skill.
Great start. I will be looking for more of this story. Keep it up. The USAF Brat is a great addition.