All Comments on 'Valley Wives Ch. 01'

A great beginning and lot's of possible twists and turns! Keep going

I can't wait for the instalment...excellent start

lots of possibilities here, don't wait to long between installments/chapters!

Now; the presure is on YOU to produce!

Wonderful set up of three couples. Tantalizing enough to make me look for more.

Very nice setup with good introductions to the characters. Establishing motivations for what is to come is much better than the "wham-bam-thank you-ma'am" that tends to dominate. Personally, I do not like the present tense: it always strikes me as awkward. Otherwise, well done.

Hoping for more to "cum"...