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All Comments on 'Vampires Don't Sparkle Ch. 16'

by maestro84

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Lame and uninteresting.

Other than the part about Ben it was boring.

Iread2relaxIread2relaxabout 7 years ago
Great development

Every chapter does not have to be action pack. I think you did a fantastic job of moving the story forward and having Bill make a decision. Now, will Ben become a pure blood, and how is that possible?

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...