All Comments on 'Vampires Don't Sparkle Ch. 20'

Is this the end of this story now?

Well it was a great story. I can only hope there will be a part 2 in the future

That was fun if a bit short, if your ending it here. I love your story, please please tell me you have more of this or other stories.

But please read through before submitting. There are so many silly mistakes they detract from your story telling. I refer to the missing letters, wrong letters and use of wrong word (same sounding).

This is the best story I've read on the internet. Try to keep it young even if that means focusing a new story on the new child or make another chapter showing what their new life is like.

Great job. Enjoyed it.

I thought Ben was a dead man in this chapter. But luckily that was not the case. So good job on the ending.

Come on,lol. You can't just leave us readers off by letting us know that Emily is pregnant. Please!!! One more chapter?

Please make another season to this!

I just found this series. I hope there is more. She tells the readers she was pregnant then that is the end of it?

Loved the series and hope you find time to continue it.

I agree with the others. You left one hell of a cliff hanger with her being pregnant. We would like to know what happens. Really loved this series really could do with more of it.

I have player with makings chapter that takes place years later when their child is grown up. Right now I am focused on the Lilith stories but haven't ruled out Chapter 21.

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Excellente Series!

11/10!!!!!

Nooo not another unfinished series 😭

See Vampire's don't Sparkle Legacy!

I was wondering if the next part could involve how emily knows how to use her fangs in chapter 13