All Comments on 'Vanessa's Slave Ch. 01'

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fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 9 years ago
Excellent start

Well written you have created the skeleton to what should be a great story I look forward to future chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Give me more!

Great start, don't stop writing!

JendehJendehalmost 9 years ago
Excellent start

1st off...PLEASE keep this lesbian. There isn't nearly enough lesbian NC out there. :)

Secondly this was very well written and a nice set up for future chapters. Can't wait to see what you have to offer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
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1st off there are many lesbian nc,this doesnt even have a guy why are you worried

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