All Comments on 'Vegas Fun'

Please have someone edit your stories for grammatical errors. Enjoyed except for the errors.

......a good story, but the grammar and misspelling ruined your story.

If you got a good editor and he or she shredded your rough drafts and sent you back confetti

But the author almost cannot properly complete a sentence.

I come to a sex site to read fuck stories and its not a best seller.

I must complain.I want great literature here!!!!

How many married couples wind up doing this in vegas ? An old customer of mine hates it there because him and his wife on there 35 anniversary went there and had a great 3 days until the second to last night. They wanted to get a lap dance as a goof. They met 3 others couples there and went to another place in a hotel where the people were staying. They were all drunk and smoked pot for the first time in over 30 years. In the suite 2 other guys joined them that they knew and passed viagra and extacy around . Before they knew it everyone was fucking and switching but it didn't register until morning when he woke to a bj and looked over and saw his wife being double teamed by two guys very aggressively. They were now ready to leave and were saying goodbye and the others were all say it was great that they joined them but the guy that had the room said he needed one more sample of his wife and guided her to her knees and placed his dick in her mouth. They continued to all talk as his wife blew him and swallowed his load like it was normal. They cried and fought the last day and for weeks after home . It just got out of control with something there not into or could handle. He said the night was a blur because of the drugs and drinking their not use to but the double team and blow job mentally destroyed him . He said even her ass which he's only fingered over the years was fucked by all the guys there that night (5). He said they fucked her so hard in the DP that she wasn't even coherent as they kept switching from ass to pussy. One guy strattled her face as the other fucked her and made her lick him clean balls dick and asshole. This all seemed common among all the other people there but it is just twisted to me and this guy . Almost cost him his marriage but they are still together 5 years later I hear

Good read!!!

Was imagining a fat dick in your butt.

The storyline was a good idea but it seems that no one proofread it or edited it. The disjointed sentences took time to decipher and some were just incomplete sentences so I skipped over them.

I gave the writer a 4 for courage to submit, effort and the storyline. Come back, be creative and get a proofreader and editor.

Just to piss of the whore of Lit, Bonnie. fuck off cunt.

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka NEEDYOU200 aka 5+ANNONY!

My wife a hot 39 year old Blond-wore a red thong bikini Aria Hotel. Its was super hot out so she headed to the bar for drinks, not wanting to wear a cover up because she was sweating-- In no time another guy started to talk with her and to my surprise she flirted with him, allowing him to touch her thong line above her new tattoo.. Next thing she invited her new friend to join us at the pool side. Australian as well. Well, the next thing I know we are all heading to another bar, she allowing her thong to be viable in the hotel. At the new bar she sat in the middle of the two of us, at times allowing our friend to have his hand linger linger on her upper thigh as he was commenting on what great shape she was in--she even at one point allowed his hand even more access to her very upper thigh-- so hot that drives her crazy with me. then next thing i know I have to got to the bathroom, in which she txt me to say he just kissed her and his hand went over her belly button ring -- and loved it--could she do it again--i told her yes-- That i would be a few moments--when I returned-- his arm was around her waist, hand was sitting on this highest part of her thigh and hip area--and he commented what an amazing blond I was married to-- then the fun really began;

We trip to Vegas annually, and my husband and I love me showing off my body at the pool. If you aren't familiar with how hook-ups work in LV, the ones not involving prostitutes occur most often at the pool. I am allowed to pick out a guy or couple and we end up in our room enjoying the fun for hours. I prefer the couples because I am very bisexual. Vegas is a wonderful oasis for sexuality. 5 stars for this story.

Be careful what you wish for, it might just come true.

"Hearing your wife explain how much she liked another guy's dick is a tough thing to hear. I explained my favorite part was her making eye contact with me."

Another stupid cuck with his brains in his cock end.

to make it a 4 star. Otherwise good.

Like Grimas5 said, you need to proofread for grammar and spelling, as the errors distract from the good story and sex scene.

My wife bought her a bikini that I didn't know about. I went to the pool to get a spot for us. She came out of the doors I almost shoot my load . Her bikini covered her big nipples barely. Her bottoms covered lower lips and nothing more. I knew she had shaved because her suit wasn't covering much . As she lays down I see her suit slid between her slit showing those sweet lips. She gets what she wants plenty of attention.

Silly, overused theme story written by barely literate juvenile.