All Comments on 'Vegas Vacation Ch. 01'

yeah 100%bs

who is going to let a guy drop his drawers in fron of his wife UNLESS it was agreed upon

than your writing style sucked

plus all asians have slanted pussies to match their eyes

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I give you a 2 for the hot wife description. Leave the husband out of next story. Try a nonconsent theme with her being taken by someone. Perhaps the brother or father in law,

anyone but the wimp husband. Always more exciting to read about a chase and capture then a sacrifice.

the least bit erotic!

So, you are not an acclaimed author... Big deal... I liked your story. It was rough and ready. Looking forward to next chapter.

So where is chapter 2? It promises to be even better.

We're waiting

I hope there will be a chapter 2!