All Comments on 'Veronica'

by bob4527

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

If you're going to focus on the fetish and "leave out the details" of the actual sex, then this shouldn't be in erotic couplings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Some of us think peeing on other people is disgusting...

I really did not think that peeing on each other is remotely interesting - you fucked up a perfectly good story...

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