All Comments on 'Vice Cop Ch. 05'

A few Literotica writers (mysteriousquill for instance) actually write lengthy novels that contain upwards to 30 and plus chapters. The focus is not just the sex, but the plot and characters. You have a flair for the erotic, for adventure and for action. Each chapter leaves the reader with a cliffhanger ending or a hook and we're urged to keep reading. You have interesting characters - Hudson the ambitious cop who is trying to find himself and can't realize that Lexa is the one for him. Even if Hudson is like an action hero from the movies and seems to say catch phrases and uses dry, cool wit, he's still a guy we root for. You create atmosphere of suspense and you write well.

I've really been enjoying this series, and I think this is the best chapter yet. The sex scene is really hot; I had to -- ahem -- excuse myself for a minute while reading it. AudreyHepburn writes crisp, realistic dialogue, and the characters, especially the two main ones, Hudson and Lexa, are well-defined. My one quibble is that some scenes are a bit preposterous and over-the-top, but basically she is a really good writer.

“Gentility flowed between them.”

How exactly does that happen?