by dreamer117
to tell a boring story that's about as erotic as a stale cheese sandwich.
when the point of the story was so simple and mundane ? How many stories do you think are on this site about husband's enjoying a slut wife ? That was your whole point it really had very little to do with lust and a lot more to do with condoned infidelity and in the long run it is very typical of all the other Indian sories on this site too.
It was hard to work through. I got through the first page and skipped through it, but the poor English really hampered the story.
A far too long and rambling story.Quite unbelieveable,and silly.A waste of the readers time.
That's what this is, english practice for someone who learned it as a second language. I sort of admire you for the effort, but cannot devote my time to your lessons.
dear dreamer 117,
Hearty Congrats.u r great. u showed to the sex seeking world as to what r the dangers of wreckless hunger for lust .
we r glad u plotted to save her from a broken marraige.
nice plot and an eye opener to sex crazy men and women to be eternal vigilant . otherwise the bitter truth is a disgraceful fall and devastated marraiges, where children could be the innocent victims.
thank god, u saved her.
ananymous
"...As my hubby didn't allow me to work all these years..." My goodness! What kind of stone age bear you married woman!!!!