by Ug
Entertaining revenge endings are the money shots of this genre. Too damn few.
Would have the cops at his house so fucking fast his head would spin. You can't slap a child in a parking lot without someone calling the cops, so why would people just watch a rape?
You could have done a better job than this.
Should have spoken about STD issues and going back to hubby without getting tested.
Think you missed an oppurtunity to turn this from non consent to reluctance.
She could have done as she promised whilst the virus did its work and then dramatic twist she enjoys it and it becomes the hottest she has ever had.then the blackmail is removed and its Victoria's hands if she wishes to repeat the experience
Otherwise great series and loved chapters 1-3
Well done very good ending, Neil is definitely my favourite Character ๐๐๐
As Mr. Burns might say, rubbing his fingers together "Excellent".
One of the best turnabout is fair play.
start to finish entertainment and keeping the reader on the edge!!;))turnabout is fair play!! Wow Neil!! :)) Wow Victoria!! :)) So wow,writer!! :))
I really liked the story, loved the first 4 chapters.
Was really hoping Michael would fuck a baby into her belly and seeing how she would react to being pregnant.
Pretty much loved it all, but the ending could have been much better.
Was hoping for Michael to be the winner but Victoria never fully giving in, or atleast not having a full victory, like having her managing to get blackmail material on him but getting pregnant in the process
Nice ending! I always love it when the victim manages to regain her power and freedom. And I really appreciate that she took pity on Neil and managed to work out something mutually beneficial. Who says being nice doesn't pay? And she gets perfect nails to boot.