All Comments on 'Victoria's Desire'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
more chapters?

I would love reading more chapters of this story...please

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26almost 8 years ago
Something missing in this one...

Keep trying

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Just like me.

I wrote this Anonymously because I can't find my password.

Loved your story and sent you a note via feedback.

Carygrant_69@hotmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Bad set up

This story needs a better set up. Yes this teenager plan is possable, but not likely to happen. Try harder to plan something that is possable. V

LordDeanLordDeanalmost 3 years ago

I enjoyed the ending of this story very much. It was highly erotic and "stimulating".

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