All Comments on 'Victorious Defeat'
by MacDracor
- 5 Comments
Anonymousover 15 years agoThe story was very arousing but there were a couple of things that prevented me from giving you 5 stars. Firstly, there were numerous spelling mistakes that detracted from the enjoyment and secondly, if you're going to do a story in medieval times then the language should follow suit. I doubt people used "bitch" and "bastard" during that era.
Oli72over 15 years agoWhy would they not use "bitch" or "bastard"? A bitch is a female dog, coming from Middle English bicche, from Old English bicce. And bastard designates an illegitimate child - the only problem here might be that depending on the social circles, being an illegitimate child might not necessarily be something bad....
Anonymousover 5 years agoAmazing story - loved it from the start. Look forward to more stories like this one.
