All Comments on 'Visiting Her: A Breathtaking Tale'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Loved it!

First time I've EVER posted a comment on a story, but could not resist -- I thought it might be a TINY bit long, but, really, I LOVED this story -- so turned on right now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome

A great story, please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

OMG i so totally loved what she did to him. I hope she does him like that again and again, and punishes him whenever she needs to, or wants to for her own pleasure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
truly breathtaking

The story is just another femdom fantasy.

But what stood out was your style of adding your self humiliation scentences. The way you kept humiliating yourself (about what happens in a slaves mind ) just makes this story marvelous . Ive never related myself so well with slaves in any other story i have ever read.

Please continue writing. More importantly never lose the awsome style of narration you have.

joela_99yjoela_99yabout 10 years ago
Great story!

As a previous commenter said, it is great how you explain what goes on in a submissive's mind. And the description of the action was great too.

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