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CaseyMannCaseyMannover 6 years ago
Good but...

Good story. Too many wrong word choices and mixed verb tense. I'd be happy to be your proof reader if you should so desire.

FuckingLadyLikeFuckingLadyLikeover 6 years ago
More please

Wish I had a Mr Jones

jon.hayworthjon.hayworthover 6 years ago
GOOD

Wow what an improvement on the last episode.

BTW for authenticity the pills are blue and either round or a distinctive diamond shape. Also in reality they take a minimum of half an hour to work and are best if taken an hour to one and a half hours before sex- (This old man takes them so he knows!)

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