All Comments on 'Voyeurism in the JLA Pt. 01'

I don't know where to start. There were considerable spelling errors, run-on sentences, incomplete sentences, poor punctuation, and on and on. Not only that, there was not enough story to even make me want to continue with this dreck. I have read some really bad attempts at writing at Literotica but, I have to say, this was worse than even most others I could not wade through. I am sorry but I am only being honest here.

I have been a comic book fanatic for over 50 years. This story makes me feel like I wasted my time.

Roger.

yikes, I think that other comment was a bit harsh. definitely needs some work, I would have preferred that the story be longer and not cut off where it was. Seemed like a premature place to stop. But please don't give up! Taking the time to write a story only to have it be judged harshly really sucks but please keep writing it's the only way to get better. I thought that there's a lot of potential in the story so far, hope that I'll get to see a part 2 in the near future