All Comments on 'Waking Up with Brooke Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Hot story, but you need to pick a point of view and stick with it! Lookin forward to the next chapter, TheGuyInBlack.

wolf9696wolf9696about 9 years ago
5/5

Loving it ... looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
A good story...

but as another mentioned, you need to pick a perspective and stick to it. Parts are in the first person, while other parts are in the third person, sometimes both in the same paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Deepthroating

I remember porn star Linda Lovelace stating that the easiest way to succeed at this is laying with your head over the side of the bed and have it slowly fed to you. Someday I'll meet a t-gurl and have to try it for myself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
not really a story

More like a couple of sex scenes. Disappointing after your first chapter showed real promise

BrendaNWBrendaNWabout 9 years ago
very hot..

Nicely written.. more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great story !

I love this story and can't wait to read more sexy adventures of these two :).

Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I can't wait...

until Brooke starts thrusting her huge cock into his booty hole!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Fantastic

Great setting and love story! Can't wait to read the next chapter! When will it be posted?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
chapter 3?

chapter 3?

xploring96xploring96almost 7 years ago

Would be great if he finally gave her his ass and realized that he was really a power bottom for this hung woman. A true cum slut

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please continue

Chapter 3 please

Jb423Jb423over 6 years ago

Please continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please continue

This story is so hot, can’t wait for part three, soon please

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

WAKING UP WITH BROOKE CH. 02 when is CH 03 AND ENDING COMING

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

WAKING UP WITH BROOKE CH. 02 when will CH 03 and ending coming

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