by TheGuyInBlack
Hot story, but you need to pick a point of view and stick with it! Lookin forward to the next chapter, TheGuyInBlack.
but as another mentioned, you need to pick a perspective and stick to it. Parts are in the first person, while other parts are in the third person, sometimes both in the same paragraph.
I remember porn star Linda Lovelace stating that the easiest way to succeed at this is laying with your head over the side of the bed and have it slowly fed to you. Someday I'll meet a t-gurl and have to try it for myself.
More like a couple of sex scenes. Disappointing after your first chapter showed real promise
I love this story and can't wait to read more sexy adventures of these two :).
Great job.
until Brooke starts thrusting her huge cock into his booty hole!
Great setting and love story! Can't wait to read the next chapter! When will it be posted?
Would be great if he finally gave her his ass and realized that he was really a power bottom for this hung woman. A true cum slut
This story is so hot, can’t wait for part three, soon please