by thewhore
Amazingly intense - it literally struck a cord as the most insanely reading I have ever been exposed to. Man it was an awesome story yet it appeared real.
My husband got me to read this story. All I can say is WOW. Loved it.
yes to all the other comments, and you can really write too. More please!
Great writing!
I hope that you have more stories to submi to the site.
Great writing!
I hope that you have more stories to submi to the site.
Very, very hot. Wonderful first story. I hope you publish many more.
I love the contrast of the two proper women with the 'dirtiness' of their lusts. Looking forward to your next submission.