All Comments on 'Wandering Thoughts'

I would think that her thoughts had wondered too far for someone who has not given oral. I doubt she would be able to take him the way she is daydreaming. There is the gag reflex she has not taken into consideration.

Thank you gentleone58 for your constructive criticism and reading my story. I should have been more specific in that she has never performed oral on Sir before. She has knowledge of it and has done it before. Perhaps not as much as she would have liked or how she would have liked it to be done. But with Sir, she has no idea what can possible happen when it's time for it. I hope this clears it up a bit. I'll keep any eye out for stuff like that if I do another written submission.

This is very well written. It would be great if you could expand on the punishment.

Unfortunately there was no part 2 planned for this. I can recommend that you use your imagination to come up with your own preferred form of punishment for Sir to administer to his Pet.