All Comments on 'Wanna Get a Pizza...and Fuck? Ch. 02'

Not a lot of character development, a whole lot of threesome variations.

Thank you to all who read my story. I have been reading stories here for a few years and have finally decided to try my hand at writing. I have never written anything, ever. No short stories, poems, term papers, or really anything of any length at all.

I have to say, I am now deeply impressed by the amount of effort it takes to write a story of any length. I am certainly making mistakes, and I am trying to learn from them. Literotica is a great site,and I hope to be submitting more very soon.

Thanks, Earthmvr

You could have some further fun with this,some really wicked stuff (be one hell of a poly relationship ,for one) but it is great as it stands.

Great job! Keep it up. Thanks.

You have to come back with one more chapter. He's gotta tap that ass!

I know two of the people in this story, which in itself makes me want to finger myself but after reading it all I can think about is hard I'm going to cum.

Excellent excellent story. Well paced and believable! You really should do one more chapter. And write more stories. You have a knack.

Something about the whole wife/ex-wife thing is great!! Good job, do another one and have them continue!!!

This makes perfect sense.