All Comments on 'Want'

This story is so very sexy--I love the way you build the longing and desire between them, and it feels so true to life. Thanks for a delicious read.

Unusual point of view & tense, but very well written. I liked that you left gaps for me to fill in (eg. her age). Really enjoyable.

Spoiled by the crap about the pill

He should have just pushed is cock in as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

I disagree. I get turned on more knowing a man cares about these things.

Meh. Solidly meh. Just a predictable story that was written ok.