All Comments on 'Want'

Meh. Solidly meh. Just a predictable story that was written ok.

I disagree. I get turned on more knowing a man cares about these things.

Spoiled by the crap about the pill

He should have just pushed is cock in as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

Unusual point of view & tense, but very well written. I liked that you left gaps for me to fill in (eg. her age). Really enjoyable.

This story is so very sexy--I love the way you build the longing and desire between them, and it feels so true to life. Thanks for a delicious read.