by onemoreday
Looking forward to reading more. Please don't wait too long to post another chapter.
I like the pace for the beginning. It was kinda like..here is how we got here. And then it ended in a perfect place where you pulled up tight and you have this big confrontation....Though Ashton has some explaining to do as to why a drunken pass makes him drop his club and friends.
I loved how it really caught how so many freshmen feel...Hell, some of us felt it longer than freshman year. I really look forward to more.... I hope as you move forward into their relationship that you slow it down a tad
I really feel for Thomas, who is young, shy, very unsure of himself. I just hope that Ashton takes him under his wing and is kind to him, but I also hope for some hot action between these two!