All Comments on 'Wanting Him'

by onemoreday

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hooked already!

Please continue! Loving this story

FlamingHailsFlamingHailsover 9 years ago

Loving this story. Can't wait to read more!

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIover 9 years ago
Good Read. 5*****

Looking forward to reading more. Please don't wait too long to post another chapter.

jackfrost626jackfrost626over 9 years ago
more pls

Really liked it can't wait to see what hapens next

canndcanndover 9 years ago
really good start

I like the pace for the beginning. It was kinda like..here is how we got here. And then it ended in a perfect place where you pulled up tight and you have this big confrontation....Though Ashton has some explaining to do as to why a drunken pass makes him drop his club and friends.

I loved how it really caught how so many freshmen feel...Hell, some of us felt it longer than freshman year. I really look forward to more.... I hope as you move forward into their relationship that you slow it down a tad

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Holy angst, Batman!

I'm in love with this story already.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Can't wait

I can't wait to see how this stories goes

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
please write more.

I am hooked! I will love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I really feel for Thomas, who is young, shy, very unsure of himself. I just hope that Ashton takes him under his wing and is kind to him, but I also hope for some hot action between these two!

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