All Comments on 'War over the Roses'

by magmaman

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggalmost 11 years ago
Humor for the Laconicly Sweltering & Bemused, Bi-Polar Baby Boomers

Story told in slow but ever-tightening concentric circle like a shark languidly stalking it's prey. MGM flirts shamelessly with sub-plots, female neighbors, adjunct tangents & characters along the way.

Yet he always returns slightly bamboozled reader to the main scent of the story & backhandedly resolves plot tension. It seems so easy until you try it yourself. Kudos.

Jim44444Jim44444almost 11 years ago
MGM strikes again.

Another fantastic story from the great author with a slightly twisted mind. Only MGM could keep this from becoming a bad neighbor revenge story. Plus he has setup a future story involving Sammi, what a twisted mind he has. Thanks for writing.

magmamanmagmamanalmost 11 years agoAuthor
I took the time to check, Tazz

I still see your comments on my stories so I am not sure what is happening. Thanks, and pro or con, always appreciated.

To Jim? What is this "slightly twisted" stuff? I am WAY more twisted than just slightly.

Lol.

Thanks,

MGM

cpetecpetealmost 11 years ago
Ha Ha Ha

If you do not love this tale...you do not understand it!

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69over 2 years ago

God you have a fun life!

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

Well I find this a bit of an odd one! A bit of just a tall tale

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6', 186#, published writer. I have worn many hats. As a young man I was crazy, carefree and making wads of money. Then along came a messed up war and I was cannon fodder. From there I came home even crazier, and survived a 120 MPH crash which got me 15 years in a wheelchair...

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