by eviltwin52
And his wife, Although she knew what hotel he was at, didn't bother to look? A better end would have been for the wife And kids to be taken over by daddy also. To many holes in this finale.
Omg where is the man who will turn my life into this, I want to be a black mans property and whore myself out for him while he turns me into a trap
Writing kinda went to stupid. Why would a pimp take a great looking, top money making whore that is loving what she is doing, then mark her up so that she doesn't look like a top money maker? And as compared to #3 the sex fell way off also. Just my opinion. You are a good writer.