by eviltwin52
Writing kinda went to stupid. Why would a pimp take a great looking, top money making whore that is loving what she is doing, then mark her up so that she doesn't look like a top money maker? And as compared to #3 the sex fell way off also. Just my opinion. You are a good writer.
Omg where is the man who will turn my life into this, I want to be a black mans property and whore myself out for him while he turns me into a trap
And his wife, Although she knew what hotel he was at, didn't bother to look? A better end would have been for the wife And kids to be taken over by daddy also. To many holes in this finale.