All Comments on 'Was It Really Her Fault?'

He dumped the whore pig so I loved your story.

Good story line and well written.

It is a good story that's given.. but the title is not proper as there's no doubt at all it was her fault....

Very good. I was a bit bothered that everything was taken on Carrie's word, no verification. I know I would have wanted to know for sure what happens Thursdays. Perhaps proof of infidelity is not required in the UK? Also, I guess that having moved out of country, custody proceedings are handled differently?

are getting to be one of the better authors on this site and this story was very good.Keep up the good work.

I'm glad. And without real violence to cause him real trouble. Guess he should not have believed Carrie that first night and gone with her or have verified. But that was all water under the bridge by the time they got home and he learned what his wife had been doing. The fact that both of the women were braless, that his wife went so easily with Nick adn that Carrie came on so strong, should have made him aware that there was more going on. When Carrie later confirmed that his wife was up to it, it should have been clear by then that it all had been set up by Carrie and Nick, with the consent of his wife. Not to mention her cheating with Nick/Carrie later on. He was indeed better off without her. G.Belgium.

Great story, I would probably have walked in on them the last Thursday before leaving. Complete with pictures for the internet.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. It's good to read a story that has a believeable amount of vengence without some cuckold bending over backwards to justify the cheating of a whoring wife. Thank you.

Well done and a good read. I liked the way you minimized the confrontation, but still made it work. Keep writing.

Although I have to think that Carrie and Jessy had a setup going. She missed the excitement, she was wearing a sexy dress, she warned him off upsetting Nick so that he held back when he ordinarily would not have, the 3 bottles of wine, and she had no problem with him getting close to Carrie.<P>

Although her apparent distress at the end of the night did seem real. Too bad Dave could not have gone into counseling with her. It might have helped them get over it. His cutting off all affection for over 3 months must have been distressing. Did that make her turn back to Nick or was it finishing what she originally set out to do? She must have known that further contact with Nick and Carrie would mean the end of the marriage.<P>

The story does not make it clear when she started back up with them. Would have been a nice to know. But her actions at the end, when clearly she can tell that he knows, are the death knell. She showed him then "how much she loves him." Not as much as screwing Nick.<p>

Thanks for sharing.

As stated, the ending felt "rushed & some loose ends". No revenge on Nick was dissatisfying and Carrie got off easy [he could & should have been more creative while the opportunity presented itself]. Jessy simply was let off with minimal consequences and she most likely got the best end of the deal. She gets to continue as a typical slut wife - no responsibility for the child and gets married again to screw up another person's life. A decent ending for all three of the cheating characters would have been a series of STD's which would slowly reduce them to the level of humanity they deserve.

<p>But I sat and thought about it and three key points kept me from thinking so.</p>

<p>- One Jessy was willing to give another man a blowjob at the drop of a hat. Sure Carey said it was anything goes, but "Jesse" was the one who performed that act at Nicks request, all while knowing that Nick was someone that her husband said time after time was a man who he couldn't stand the sight or company of.</p>

<p>- Two Jessy kissed Dave (her husband) without a second thought after blowing another man. That turned my stomach and I just read about it. I for one couldn't understand someone who would do that to some they loved, even if they thought they were getting a blowjob from another woman. This seemed like she wanted to punish Dave for being with Carey.</p>

<p>- Three she never gave Dave a blowjob, until right before he left her. She resisted it for years, but in one night she gave Nick one without much prompting? Yep I could see why Dave's character was hurt and had problems wanting to sleep with her again</p>

<p>The only things I thought were over the top was when he left the country with Emily. Emily was hers too, and that seemed kinda of harsh. While she screwed Dave over, she didn't screw Emily over. If you had added something to the story like Emily was in the same room when the three of them played or something. Something to make her an unfit mother around her child I could have gone for him taking Emily out of the country. But without it, it seems like justified revenge going just a step to far.</p>

<p>This was probably one of the best stories you've posted so far. Not because Dave got revenge and a divorce, but when you showed the characters emotions you seemed to keep them consistent and believable. I found myself thinking, "If my wife <i>never<b> ever</b></i> gave me a blowjob for all the time that we had been married, and then at the drop of a hat one night gives a man she knew I greatly disliked a blowjob for no other reason than because he asked for one, <i>and</i> then kissed me right afterwards, I'm not sure I could ever kiss or sleep with her again either, and could I stay married to her at that point would be the next question". I don't believe I could either if that's all I thought about. When you did that and carried that complete thought process out, I didn't have to sit and think "Why are the characters going out into left field for a resolution?" the points made sense to me and I could relate to them. I didn't have to feel they were forced to do anything contrary to what I'd been given to read at this point in the story.</p>

<p>And since her character never really tried to make it up in the story to Dave, I couldn't see anything but them getting divorced. I know you put in a statement about her trying and/or trying to dress up for Dave, but that to me showed it was on "her" timetable that he was to quickly forgive her and that her character never really understood how what she had done with Nick truly hurt Dave's character. If she had she would have tried to give him space and work with him to get through what she caused by desire and miscommunication. But instead she went to Carey and Nick to get more sex.</p>

<p>The only other over the top thing I saw was Dave not being able to keep his hands to himself. If he had, possibly, this wouldn't have happened, but the question is "If the thought of Dave doing the same with Carey bothered Jessy so much, why didn't she stop it herself instead of trying to ride the train to cheatingville and get even with Dave, when she had never seen Dave or Carey do anything?".</p>

<p>That act of wanting to get even, made it seem like her fault to me (^_^)</p>

<p>Nice story</p>

-Risq

i believed it made sense - a bit cruel and unjust at the end keeping her from her kid - but it all came from the characters who did NOT go against their character. well done.

Its Obvious from the Get go that Jessey was involved... in a deep swinger conspiracy with Carrie & Nick and she DID fuck Nick that evening.

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This story isnt Awful... But there are some serious PLOT holes. If these has been explained this story it could of been MUCH better.

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for example At first the husband is Furious towards his whore wife Jessy... and that is understanable since 1) the last time things started to get too freindly between Jessy and Nick he reacted strongly 2)it SEEMED to be so out of character for Her.

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But according to the story it is <b> MONTHS </b>before he says ANYTHING to Carrie! His intial reaction is <i><b> "The bitch. The lying bitch," </b></i> but he does / says <b>NOTHING</b> for months

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....<i>After a couple of months, things seemed to get back to some form of normality.</i>

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NOT until Carrie approaches HIM in the park does he EVER say anything!! absurd and unbelievable

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Carrie says...<i>"Hi big boy. How's you're love life these days, not so good I hear." </i>

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<b> How would Carrie Know THAT? Isnt it OBVIOUS to Jessey how evil and nasty Carrie was ? Is ? WHY is Jessey STILL friends with Carrie? </b>

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The rest of the story is just a Yawner with a very short and rushed Ending. The husband nevers figures out what REALLY went on... Jessey was NEVER tricked and was part of an elaborate plot to get Dave to "swing".

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The story is okay as it is. But I disagree with what others have said. I think that he was, in fact, a wimp. Yes, he did finally act. However, he allowed things to get to the stage that they were at when he finally did acted. This story, like the author's other story about 'Bank Statements' paints the same picture to me of a husband who can be proactive in the end but allows thing get out of hand before he acts. RAG

your stories will be a #1 hit.people don't like writers who like to write about whore shiting on there husbands.that wimp shit is out.give us more of the man being a man.

The end was rushed. I infer that he got re-married and had "Sisters" for Emily but it was never stated. Loose ends...

To mark a story down for a typo? Guess this guy has never experienced the passion of writing.

Oh, and by the way Anonymous, the word starting a sentence should be capitalised. Perhaps you could work on that. I thought they knew this in the US. I guess I was wrong.

But it sounded as if it were a done deal from the beginning.

The fact that she gave up on seducing should have led to first a heart to heart and second a PI. Carrie and Jenny got

what they deserved though it is not clear to me why Nick and

Carrie broke up they could have maintained the threesome.

I like it. thank you for tking the time to entertain us. Mike from Texas

Last time I looked, each of us is entitled to an opinion of our own. Perhaps not so in England. You might again read the comment to which you refer. You might then note that the word "there" begins a continuation of a sentence begun in the title of the remarks and need not be capitalized. If you hadn't been so full of yourself, you would've noticed this. I'm sure your smugness has nothing to do with the country in which you reside.

BTW Anon Noreen is introduced as Dave's lovely new wife before the reference to Emily.<p>I liked the revenge on Carrie - that was poetic and well deserved. Actually he did end up with revenge on Nick, as Nick and Carrie did split up. Good story!

Britease:<p>I believe consequences are always in order; sometimes as the dissolution of a relationship, other times the couple experiencing the process of reconciliation. I felt those you penned were appropriate and fair. I'll agree to a point with the comments of a previous person that complete separation of mother and child does seem extreme, but then this woman has shown herself to be severely untrustworthy. Her spiriting away the child from its father would not seem a stretch.<p>I agree with Harry. The first get together has all the earmarks of a setup. It certainly appears that this was not the first time that 'Jessy' and 'Nick' had dallied. 'Dave' and 'Jessy's' conversation on the way home supports that thought.<p>I didn't find this story satisfying. I found myself not caring what happened to any of the characters in your story. I felt the narrative was too mechanical, unimaginative, and was blandly presented. For me there were simply too many holes in the plot. I'm really not clear as to why 'Jessy' allowed herself to be taken in by this couple. Was she that restless and/or unhappy? I didn't read anything indicating that. I would hope that it would be for more than simply missing her friends. With her having experienced her husband's reaction to her behavior with 'Nick' on the memorable evening, she continues to see him? Why? And 'Dave's' leaving 'Carrie' tied and naked on her desk all night at work would have, in any normal environment, led to someone in blue knocking on his front door. I agree with others who felt the end was quite rushed. 'Noreen,' 'Dave's' marriage to her and his subsequent children came out of nowhere. 'Jessy's' and 'Carrie's' fates were too abbreviated.<p>You really need to consult an editor. There were simply too many grammatical errors in your story. "Britease," thanks for the effort.

When Carrie insisted that she go talk to them, he should have known something was up. Carrie being untrustworthy was plain as day, and predictable. Fact of the matter is that he should not have been dancing with her in the first place. The husband had just as much fault getting this started as Jessy and Carrie, he was just to nieve.

I want to say that I did find this story interesting. Sure everyone would have done it differently, this was the authors story. I did find myself staying with it to find out what exactly happened.

The ending did seem a bit rushed but that happens when you want to hurry and finish a story. I know I've done it. All in all it was an interesting read. Would I have done things differently? Of course! But, it wasn't my story.

Congrats author.

with respect

DG Hear

Unique story line. I liked it. A change from the mundane.

The punishment doesn't ease the pain in these cases,it just tends to burden the lives of all who are involved.

The same with revenge, they both lose there luster after a short while. Your story was well written,and fast paced, you brought out the human side of the husband,but both the husband and wife seemed real to life. I think this story is closer to fact than fiction, and made your story seem real......Rich

I burst out laughing out loud a few times, when the author had the wimpy husband act like he was not wimpy and was just indecisive. <p>

the dialogues were just totally unbelievable, even if a few readers jump up and down like starved chimps being given some over-ripen bananas, when the guy announced his "resolve" by packing and taking little Irish colleen and jumping into his jag, which, by the way, is the biggest money loser transportation vehicle in the world, an absolute piece of junk, which, needless to say, have nothing to do with this story,,,, but this is how these writers tell these stories: they go from original premise to talking about something totally different, but most readers, again, jump like chimps, if the idiot changes locks, closes accountrs, etc. <p>

it's almost complete nonsense.

have done to stop her. Stop her this time, what about next time? Carrie was the instigator and seemed to have a plan that had been worked out by the other three to bring him on board. Trouble is he didnt want to get on board. Personally I think he was to light on all three of them. Nick deserved some very nice special prize. Carrie actually got to enjoy her punishment to a point. He wife herself was never punished at a level to equal her adultry, betrayal, lying, and continous cheating. I am glad he finally found a wife worthy of him.

"WAS IT REALLY HER FAULT." Sure it was. Whe went to the dinner all decked out to the 9's, braless and she even admitted that she had to look good for the competition. She knew what was planed and what was going to happen and she was hoping the little miss slut carrie could detract him long enough for her to get a hard dick. Ah, but the best of plans laid by mice and men often go astray. He did not play their game, but he found out later that his lovely wife had broken her marriage vows and she expected that he would have broken them also, so neither one of them was in the wrong. Well, Emily learned a very hard lesson the painful way.

On the up note to all of this, I really liked the way he took his revenge out on the the slut carrie. He got her into a position that she could not deny and the photos on the internet were a plus. Too bad someone did not take polaroids of her and pass them to everyone they knew. I would say that the cheating wife and the slut friend of hers got just what they deserved, but it would have been better if he had gotten both of them naked and standing breast to breast and attached a small padlock to each ring making them unseperatable, then tying their legs to the desk. Can you imagine them tryin to reach down and the rings pulling so hard that they had to stand back up. Then he could have called the fire department and had them come in about an hour before opening so they could enjoy the sluts.

Isn't revenge sweet......... As George Pepard use to say,"I Like It When A Plan Comes Together"

Looks to me like Jessy may have set things up herself. Enjoyed the revenge aspect, but it should have included Nick. He must have been in on the plan. When 3 people plan to swing without the participation of the 4th, trouble has to ensue. The final insult was when Jessy, suspecting that Dave knows, gives him a reluctant BJ that she has obviously been supplying Nick, and still goes off to her assignation. Ditch the bitch was the only proper reply. I usually like reconciliation, but not for these two.

<p>The beginning was shaky, the buildup was good, and the ending was rushed. This story reminded me of Leo Davis' "Predator and Prey" but was not as well executed.</p>

<p>Was Jessy truly that bad, particularly since her pleas and attempts to makeup for her actions were all rebuffed? I'm unsure about that. However, I am sure that this husband had his mind made up after the first encounter. The marriage was over at that point.</p>

<p>Your ending was rushed and characters were thrown in at light speed in order to justify some moral high ground. As a result, the ending was not satisfying. Both your husband and wife had virtually no character, no depth. Having the ex-wife fighting for visitation on one hand and escaping to America on the other, was most inconsistent and gave us no understanding of her character. Then you mentioned in laws, a new wife, another marriage, more children and a reconciliation of parent and child that only showed the callousness of the husband by virtually kidnapping his child.</P>

<p>It was all too much too quickly.</p>

oh he should have pulled her nipple ring out though and told her he diddnt like shit like that and why did she get it ...

Me personally I would have had a bit more revenge on Jessy. And certainly Nick would have some justice visited on him. Was the husband too hard on his ex-wife? actually I think he was too soft. By the way what is it with these stories that have the wives cheating after 5 or 6 years, it used to be the 7 year itch have things changed?

He should have been arrested before he set foot outside his front door the morning he was planning to leave the country. He never would have made it to Ireland. Carrie's only logical explanation would have been that our hero raped her.

Rape!?!?! Sounded like consensual sex play in the story. And arrested for what, carrying the game too far, like she did? She didn't get what she deserved and neither did Jessy or Nick. He got group betrayed and her parents were cool with it. He and his daughter had a better life with a better wife. I liked the ending.

You did a great job of writing a fantasy story. I bow to Risq_001, as his comments cover all I would put forth.<P>Thank you for some good entertainment and please keep writing. <P>PT

Pretty well scattered.

Revenge was sweet. But it's too bad you did not fuck Carry and knock her up and then left her....

First of all, Carrie and Nick were upfront about their intentions to swing with Jessy and Dave. Dave had expressed his feeling about Nick's flirting before so when Carrie came in with her lies Jessy should have limited her playing. After she blows Nick which she never did with Dave she tries to make up with Dave. It sounds like once she gave up on Dave and her marriage she joined Carrie and Nick which was the original plan. Carrie was a slut but she was a honest one. Jessy on the other hand was a lying cheating slut. Remember she brought Carrie and Nick into their lives.

You did excellent work in your character development. The idea that others have suggested to just, 'throw the bitch out' doesn't work when you have a small child. Too many rate submission to 'submarine' contributing author's best effort. See the comments made and the ratings given by Harry in VA (aka Little Mind). Because of this, few new stories crack the top 100 list, although a number do deserve to do so.

its almost funny how dumb or conniving she was. did she really think her husband sent carol in to say its okay if she wanted to sleep with nick!? jesus, some ppl are retarded. and whats sad, even though this a story, ppl are really that stupid and i even know someone who went throught something like this. oh, it was nothing as bad i guess, but she did basically cheat bc one of her friends said hed like it, especially "sloppy seconds". supposedly the only thing she said was this"really? okay." anyway, even if i didnt know this, id say she got what she deserved.

husband got what he deserved> He was to fucking dumb ass to make it real.. He should have gone in and grabbed his wife and told her that they were leaving and if she wasn't then she would find the door bolted from inside till he could get the locks changed and she was looking at a divorce...that's what i think..But he was just too dumb ass to do that

whores or show the guy to be a total wimp. This guy told his wife no before it started. Carrie attempted to seduce him to further the game. He was dumb enough to let it happen, you dont do that, you tell your wife no and I am leaving, she then has a chance to make a choice. Her choice was to be a whore. A shame he couldnt arrange for all three of the others to be in a house together when a gas leak occurred and the house and the assholes disappeared suddenly. NO he wasnt to hard onthe women, they planned, deceived, connived, lied, cheated and deserved their endings if not more. The cuckolder got very little punishment. So many accidents happen so that men lose their genitals. Why not help him make it happen?

Story was good. I do agree that it seemed missing when it came to any revenge or confrontation with Nick. Jessy should have respected her husband and the husband should never have let the two go off to any other room together. Jessy should have thought about Emily when she put Nick before her family.

You are one selfish asshole! You had a golden opportunity to have all the fresh pussy you wanted but your were too much of a moral asshole to realize it. May you burn in Hell!

This wretched story of non communication and just plain stupid actions was a real disappointment. The standard Literotica husband doesn't like the other man so obviously the wife will jump in bed with the other guy without a thought. The husband will cast around like a dumb dope taking unbelievable revenges then be gratified with a new wife at the end of the tale. Am getting weary of reading of cheating wives and wronged husbands as if they talked about nothing serious in their lives before something bad happens.

Then if it does the only course is for the husband to run or to destroy people or things. Lazy or unimaginative writers make life too simple in their stories. This is one.

You've written better ones. I seldom talk about the characters because they go in whatever direction the writer takes them. However, I think this is a little unrealistic, a husband would not let things progress as they did in this story eapecially because of the child. Keep writing and the important thing is to enjoy yourself. If you enjoy and like writing that's enough. If others like your writing, that's a bonus. Thanks for your effort.

I'd give them a better score for effort. It is just a completely stupid story. If a couple fucked over someone's marriage like that, they'd would live out the week... and since any normal, sane person knows this THEY JUST DON'T FUCKING PULL THIS CRAP. Serioulsy Britease, what is your goal... are you telling all of us that you're this much of a fucking moron?? Is this something you're proud of? I mean where is your personal pride as an author????

I simply do not understand the comments of the people who hated this story. All they wanted was a boring story of "guy sees hot chick, flirts, then fucks hot chick". I thought it was amazing how the story was centered around a man who had morals and yet still ended up with some sexy dirty scenes! The moment when Jessy describes what she did when she cheated, the rough sex with Carrie strapped to the desk, the emotionally twisted blowjob...all extremely sexy moments because they were emotionally driven, with each character's actions pretty much believable according to the personalities the author had built up. This makes it seem like it could really happen which gives most guys a nice stiffy! Tell me what is unrealistic about this story other than the part where he is good friends with her parents later on, or the part where Jessy (for some reason) went into delightful detail while admitting to her husband how she had cheated??? Other than that, I dare someone to tell me what part seems unrealistic. I will put you to shame with my logic. I will explain why you are just horny guys who got disappointed that he didn't fuck Carrie on the first page! This story draws you in, teases you, shocks you, gets you hard, and then doesn't end when somebody cumms, but rather ends with the rest of the STORY.

Typical Britease story --well written but uneven in payback. Carrie got humiliated which she deserved, Nick got no consequences and Jesse got divorced and lost her child. Sad story.

60 year old George

I had a more realistic imagination when I was 10. Britease, you are not a good writer. It is a real simple concept. You can put a sentence together ok, but your stories are poor, the behavoir is just so unrealistic that your readers just don't care about the people in your stories. When I read your crap which is meant to annoy and piss us off, all I want to do is spit in YOUR FACE.

In most of your stories husband, only takes revenge on wife, what about lover? Only thing iin your story he can do is just talk with wife, even than he does not know right words to say and eventually fails. But more importantly, Characters are very poorly developed. Husbands always want to see how far a wife can go, can she really cheat but only if he can afford , divorce like do not have kids.

Now just get real, do you think if wife knows her husband knows anything about her cheating, she will still go through it, if she wanted save marriage. No woman i mean really no woman, will do so, unless she is deeply involved in with some single guy and want future with him. Please just try to be realistic, just think about real reactions, is hubby handicapped? he cant see? Does wife think he is Moron? I mean whats point in writing story like this, he did not not do anything which should tell or show us how we should face situation like that. There was no eroticism we could enjoy. Why a couple would just want to destroy some other marriage for nothing. next time Just try to explain what they really want from their actions. There is something we really want, thats why we what we do. So totally crap. Next time put little crap or Go for cucks i think that would be best thing you can write about. There is always a reason.If a husband can easily leave his wife, why would he go through with months of crap, and if he put up with crap, he would definitly fight for her, and would want to know WHY ? at least.

Author - you were to easy on Jessy especially in light of the time she spent cheating on the wimp husband. No revenge on Nick - very unrealistic & major plot hole. Jessy was remotely remorseful but you did not include her POV to help the readers understand if she was truly remorseful. Overall, it would appear she was not and just another conniving slut as featured in almost all of your efforts. Carrie - unrealistic but yea, she got what was due to her. Curious why you did not have them turn into full time whores as they were destined to do anyway?

You fool, you could have had a great time, you wanted to, but you were unable to cope with extending what you know you wanted, to your wife. What's the difference between her wanting a bit on the side, and you wanting the same?

You're an insecure person who couldn't handle the competition, you then took out your frustrations caused by your own inadequacies, on your wife.

As for those neanderthals who make violent comments about what they'd do to their wives if they ever went with someone else, they wouldn't know really, because it's highly unlikely any of those throw backs would have a wife, lol.

You did the wrong thing, you need to grow up and be more empathetic, after all, you know damn well how you felt when you were betraying your wife, therefore you should have accorded her the same understanding.

I'd be ashamed of myself if I were you.

schmid2, I think you're right melsdad is an idiot

...although, you couldn't possibly have been too hard on "poor" Jessy and you could've been a lot harder on Carrie and still suited me. A shame about old Nick getting off virtually scott free but, at least, the story had an ending where your protaganist didn't come off as a total wimp which I consider happy.

got off lightly. The women got what they deserved.

Jess was obviously lying about the first encounter.

When she sucked Nick's cock after never sucking his, he should have seen the handwriting on the wall, right then.

Who betrayed whom? I am slightly confused here. Wasn't it he who set the ball rolling in the fist place? OK so he had help from the other woman who wanted him but then he did not wish to bring the procedure he had initiated to its rightful conclusion ...... while his wife had no such compunctions. Tempting fate....and losing. That is what I call this Just gambling and losing! Should one gamble with what one values so much? Maybe he didn't really care.

In America, he's in jail for child abduction. Jessy got full custody due to his crime, he paid both alimony and child support and rarely got to see his daughter. This is a fictional story, but only in England would something like this happen the way you wrote it. Too implausible for my liking.

Carrie got about enough revenge. Nick got no revenge, he probably set the deal up with Carrie before the party. He should have been kicked in the balls several times and I guess that Jessy was punished enough as it worked out. Fuck her and I'm glad her daughter did not care to see her later.

I repeat, he should have divorced Jessy right away. I realize it is just a story and you did well. I am an old man and read a lot on Literotica. I liked your story. Be harder on the offending parties, male or female.

A parent can take their child and move without the others permission, it happens all the time. Now if he had been divorced and the cunt had custody and he took the child it would have been as you say. Child support and alimony maybe, but if the other cunt charged him with rape he would be in jail and not able to pay. If he was not in jail he could have easily wound up okay. When my ex went off the deep end we got shared custody and the amount of alimony was less than what I give to my church. The judge must have felt he had to give her something. But I didn't have to pay long as she got remarried.

Okay, cut her SOME slack because of Carrie's lies, but she still didn't know her husband was doing more than he should.

But giving a blow job when her HUSBAND doesn't get them? No fucking way!

Frankly, as sweet as the idea of Nick kissing Jesse's cummy mouth is, I'd rather he told her he knew EXACTLY where she was going, and rip open her shirt to expose the nipple piercing.

...mainly I thought he should have been somewhat more straight foreward and (honestly) I sort of missed her reactions, her "falling apart" when she realized, her game was up.

Nevertheless: Yopur stories are always a bookmark! Thank you.

Was I too hard on poor Jessy? no not in the least

Good tale though I had to reread it to get the jist of it.

Stretch it out a bit and make the thought processes a tad clearer ....

Still, good.

Thx

Nope. More accurately she wasn't hard enough on herself.

If she had been hard on herself for the mix-up at the beginning then things would have ended where they did on the first page and she would have tried to actually fix her marriage.

To not only fail to actually make an attempt at fixing her marriage and then compound that with continuing to make the same mistakes; well that's bad. To further compound things by exposing a child to people this despicable... that's the offense warranting the scale of "revenge" in this tale though.

is simple...Apparently Not. TK U MLJ LV NV

Absolutely....... 5 stars she got what she deserve. Divorce Lost seeing her child grow up. Lack of child affection! Self shame. If she came clean and repentant on every thing that last Thursday morning then she may have only her divorce to content with and still be part of her daughters life.

On other hand if she said no to every thing that faithful evening, she still have a loving marriage. And if hubby realize she she was tricked into it. And was able to reconcile everything à month after first incidence. All would be fine.

I am saddened that Nick walked away from this relatively unscathed but I guess that's how life really is.

The writing is top drawer and really draws the reader into the story. At least it did me. I would have given the writing 4 or 5 stars but was so twisted by the content and betrayal, Dave's willingness to let Emily hang out with that skank at the age 15, and no real resolution for any of the bad actors that I could only manage a 3.

Does every husband in the UK turn a blind eye and run away from problems?

great story glad how it all went down as they both were at fault for what happened, both women that is. his wife knew how he felt about going there that night so she should have figured it out that he really didn't say that. and then to keep going back for more really tells it all. glad he finally found someone to really live his life with keep writing as your stories are really good and interesting

when you are playing, only for yourself. TK U MLJ LV NV

Jersy got what she deserved - the others not so much though

I'm sure it's my own cynicism shining through, but I didn't think either woman was sufficiently "punished."

I agree that they had more punishment coming to them. Maybe even some torture. Hey, this is fiction. I can wish for anything I want. Fucking cunts. They should suffer in pain.

Not too hard on Jesse, just too soft on Nick.

He is an idiot and as much to blame as her. And unlike most of your stories there are so many holes in the plot.

At the dinner alarm bells were ringing but he ignored them - when Jessy and Nick left the room, when Cassie played up to him and when Cassie went to tell the others to slow down. He was an idiot and could and should have done something there and then.

In the divorce she would get custody and would get maintenance. There is no way he would get all their money. In fact he would probably be done for fraud for shifting the funds. That aside, if she supposedly had no money - how did she get to America then live and eat until she got the "topless" job?

It was potentially a good story but spoilt by so many holes.

As others noted Nick deserved comeuppance.... Such is life. Bad folks skate sometimes. OldBearSwitch. Thanks for writing it

Nice story and reasonable revenge against her, though the other two got off way too easily.

Thank you for writing.

Neither women were punished enough. Nick got away scott free, not really having anything invested with his own marriage. No closure at all, except for the daughter realizing her mother was not worth any effort.

Kissing and groping another woman is foreplay and definitely crossed the fidelity line. A diligent father and husband would have severed ties with swinging couple. He had his own flaws. She was just farther gone than him.

That being said. It was a nice bit of a Loving Wives genre story. You finally got around to writing the "confused communication" sub type. And it was a good one. Replete with revenge and a happy forever after ending.

The one torture you missed was not tugging Carrie's nipple ring before she left - during or after the blow job. 5*'s

Your stories re like comedy dude at least make them a bit realistic.

This story sure was different!

I liked Carrie's punishment.

So many writers don't dare

put a finger on the females in their stories.

I say pull on their rings, if they deserve it, lol.

I really like this story.

Thanks Britease!

Top ratings from me.

The ending seemed a little rushed, we didn't get hear what happened when she found out about Carrie, and did she at least try to say sorry or stay with him. Would like a little more fight for the Daughter.

Good story. Not great.

I haven’t been paying attention to publication dates. Ive been reading these in alphabetical order. This one seems like earlier writing, i.e. not as refined.

Still, good BTB so I give it 4-stars

He left Nick out of the punishment,which is a pity because he was probably the instigator.

Otherwise good story

Too many stories don't include both cheaters unless rape drugged etc it takes two to tango

too bad he didn't get nick as well

Nick got off easy.

Good story, some really nice touches. Like the others, I felt Nick was let off lightly, although that mirrors real life sometimes. Thankyou for story writing.

want a whore raising his kids. And him and the new wife should have a long talk about whose side she's on

As I see it, Dave was the one who was cheated on. The only one who owed him respect and fidelity was Jessy, the others were involved, however didn't owe Dave anything since they were Jessy's friends not his. Jessy was entirely responsible for her actions and choices. Carrie and Jessy were the main conspirators therefore bore the most responsibility. Carrie was embarrassed at work however being who she was rebounded and made the most of the situation and being enterprising, used her attributes to come up with a much more lucrative life style than an office worker. Jessy just lost out all the way around, she paid the penalty of losing her husband, child and her lovers. All around a great little story, thanks Britease for taking the time to come up with this one.

Came here for a good wank, and though the story did start off to something of that sense. It took a very slow and ominous turn which ill be honest... Very surprised there was no murder in this story with all the emotions in it.. Well done chap! maybe literotica doesnt do your story justice, or the true audience it deserves. (two thumbs up) but after 45 mins or so of reading this, im off to a cheesy corny porny story i came for!

Why let Nick off,he was the instigator of it all?.

Well......I'm not sure what should happen if this was the real world but he bured both bitches and the asshole should've got some kind of punishment. Still a good read. I also give you some leeway since I've followed your stories for so long.

Sorry Nick didn't get his but still pretty good.

the ultimate punishment is a better life. she had it coming as she threw it all away. very good. more stories please.