All Comments on 'Was It The "Wrong" Number? Ch. 09'

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happymuffinhappymuffinalmost 6 years ago
I waited so long for this

Its great to see this Story back in action

Sunset154Sunset154almost 6 years ago
Great next Chapter

Great chapter, can not wait for the next one.

darthkerrdarthkerralmost 6 years ago
Love it! Want more!

Love this story it gets better and better! 5* as usual!

goducks1goducks1almost 6 years ago
i echo all the prior comments

5 stars - of course. And - its great to have you back in your writers chair. great way to move the story forward. i really like where i THINK its headed! just keep on writing.

prop69prop69almost 6 years ago
BEST EVER

Love tenderness devotion

All rolled into a beautiful story of family

kyotie913kyotie913almost 6 years ago
Keep going please

This is a great story and I hope it keeps going. I also hope we get the next chapter sooner than September

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Please write much faster

whitewolf2367whitewolf2367almost 6 years ago
Awesome Story

Man this has to be the best story I have ever read. Thank you so much for sharing with us.

Angus74Angus74almost 6 years ago
Love it

This has been an amazing journey. I love reading where you are taking it. Keep up the great work .

Clstewart54Clstewart54almost 6 years ago
Perfect Story!

Love this series please say i won't have to wait forever for next part & any chance My Sister Stacy can get a new part too but i would understand if you're too busy, I just hate waiting forever ha

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 6 years ago
DITTO...love this this series!

Cannot wait for what I hope comes next!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
glad you are writing again

Really enjoying this series-- my favorite of all of what you have written. I have to admit that I keep checking back to see if you have posted anything new. Keep it up-- great stuff!

mybikecruisesmybikecruisesalmost 6 years ago
Mom's trip to Dallas

It might be nice to have Jill spend some time reflecting on the trip to Dallas with Angie and Jaquie as well as the visit to Angie for "dinner", to show her sudden awakening to her sexual side as well as her family love.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome

Loving this series more and more with each chapter. Very eager to see where things go and what’s in store. Thanks and Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great series!

I loved reading this whole series from the beginning. The way that you are able to capture all of the characters and make them grow from the start has been awesome. My only complaint about this chapter was the fade to black scenes when it came to the more intimate parts, especially with Jackie. It has been building up between both of them for a while and when they finally get together again, we don’t know how it goes. Feeling a little cheated. Lol. But I do look forward to keep reading this series.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 6 years ago
Good

Looking forward to the next chapter.

andrepkandrepkover 5 years ago
Wonderful "reader teaser"!

What sets this author apart from many others is the manner in which the characters in the story are fleshed out. And that's because the dialogs ring true. The wonderful thing about erotica vs. porn is that one has to use imagination, so there's no need for overly extensive and clinical sex scenes to make the story real. That is being achieved with the way the story's structured. I was gone abroad for three weeks and was delighted to "reunite" with this lovely family. It'll be exciting to await for the yummy things to come!

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Second time reading,,,,AWESOME

Most amazing Beach Adventure EVER!!!

Erotic and loving.

What a BEAUTIFUL SERIES

Each chapter offers more excitement1

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