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Love this story it gets better and better! 5* as usual!
5 stars - of course. And - its great to have you back in your writers chair. great way to move the story forward. i really like where i THINK its headed! just keep on writing.
Love tenderness devotion
All rolled into a beautiful story of family
This is a great story and I hope it keeps going. I also hope we get the next chapter sooner than September
Man this has to be the best story I have ever read. Thank you so much for sharing with us.
This has been an amazing journey. I love reading where you are taking it. Keep up the great work .
Love this series please say i won't have to wait forever for next part & any chance My Sister Stacy can get a new part too but i would understand if you're too busy, I just hate waiting forever ha
Cannot wait for what I hope comes next!!!!!!
Really enjoying this series-- my favorite of all of what you have written. I have to admit that I keep checking back to see if you have posted anything new. Keep it up-- great stuff!
It might be nice to have Jill spend some time reflecting on the trip to Dallas with Angie and Jaquie as well as the visit to Angie for "dinner", to show her sudden awakening to her sexual side as well as her family love.
Loving this series more and more with each chapter. Very eager to see where things go and what’s in store. Thanks and Keep up the great work!
I loved reading this whole series from the beginning. The way that you are able to capture all of the characters and make them grow from the start has been awesome. My only complaint about this chapter was the fade to black scenes when it came to the more intimate parts, especially with Jackie. It has been building up between both of them for a while and when they finally get together again, we don’t know how it goes. Feeling a little cheated. Lol. But I do look forward to keep reading this series.
What sets this author apart from many others is the manner in which the characters in the story are fleshed out. And that's because the dialogs ring true. The wonderful thing about erotica vs. porn is that one has to use imagination, so there's no need for overly extensive and clinical sex scenes to make the story real. That is being achieved with the way the story's structured. I was gone abroad for three weeks and was delighted to "reunite" with this lovely family. It'll be exciting to await for the yummy things to come!
Most amazing Beach Adventure EVER!!!
Erotic and loving.
What a BEAUTIFUL SERIES
Each chapter offers more excitement1