All Comments on 'Watch Me Play'

A girl helping out would be sweet.

wow...........it says it all..........good job DIR

......you are at your best when your panties are wet!

great first story. love it more to cum i hope. the writing was very hot and exciting. you are good at this kind of writing so lets have many more hot horny stories from you now.

I very much enjoyed reading this. It's nicely paced and of a good length and description of feelings as well as actions makes it highly erotic.

I will read more by you, well done!

One of my favorite subjects and you captured it wonderfully!

I felt like I was there, and wish I was!! ;)

Very Very nice

Loved it

Loving your work RED=)

I love the way her fantasy turns real around her, or almost. The sound, scent, and taste turned almost real for me, too.

Hey Delicious, I just read your short story "Watch me play". It was very well done, descriptive adjectives abound, a nice sprinkling of raw eroticism mingled with a touch of class.... Good job, Deliciosa

Garbage Can.......PG

This drips so much sexiness I gasped when she came....Very nice!

You totally put me there. I wish I was the one watching from the darkness...

That is a hot story DIR. I enjoyed it immensely!

Watching you from the shadows, licking my lips, desiring a taste of your sweet erotic honey

The story in general I liked, but unfortunately it also seemed kind of short. I found myself wishing it went into more detail.

Great job with erotic narration. Puts the reader- right there with you