by DeliciousInRed
The story in general I liked, but unfortunately it also seemed kind of short. I found myself wishing it went into more detail.
Watching you from the shadows, licking my lips, desiring a taste of your sweet erotic honey
You totally put me there. I wish I was the one watching from the darkness...
Hey Delicious, I just read your short story "Watch me play". It was very well done, descriptive adjectives abound, a nice sprinkling of raw eroticism mingled with a touch of class.... Good job, Deliciosa
Garbage Can.......PG
I love the way her fantasy turns real around her, or almost. The sound, scent, and taste turned almost real for me, too.
One of my favorite subjects and you captured it wonderfully!
I felt like I was there, and wish I was!! ;)
I very much enjoyed reading this. It's nicely paced and of a good length and description of feelings as well as actions makes it highly erotic.
I will read more by you, well done!
great first story. love it more to cum i hope. the writing was very hot and exciting. you are good at this kind of writing so lets have many more hot horny stories from you now.