All Comments on 'Watch Us'

Ok. You're a First timer. Not horrible. I personally prefer some character development. This was rushed. VERY rushed. No need to be so quick. Draw things out a bit more. What is husbands name? How did Cindy end up at a swingers party? Little things like that. Get with an editor? Lot of potential here.

2 stars

DragonRider55

I personally do NOT want character development.

I love the immediate sex—- no, the fast & immediately fucking.

Don’t listen to an anonymous.

They hide behind “no name”.

Great show.

1 page horny stories that get into sex immediately are perfect.

Thanks

Bob

Short, to the point, and sweet. Questions, not all necessary, and some of them answered means the reader does the work (that's always good). I enjoyed your story... and it had an ending without an ending to boot.

Oh, and don't listen to Bob150Bob. Some people don't like short stories and will condemn you for a quickie. Their loss, so fuck'em. They have no taste.

You can ignore the other Anonymous... the spammer. Just report it.

Well written. I enjoyed the pace and the lack of details. Nothing unnecessary. The reader can imagine themselves in that space without distraction.

I watched you and became part of the scene

I look forward to more from you.