All Comments on 'Watching Mum Ch. 02'

by Mr Story Teller

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Whew, Wow!

WOW! I just hope that when it happens the description will be vivid and actually show how a "first time" really happens. A fellow can't last too long the first time around, usually, especially in this situation.

sexmatesexmateover 19 years ago
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE SEQUEL

PLEASE CONTINUE!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great Story Telling

You sure do live up to your pen name with your vivid descriptions and details. I can't wait for the next chapters.

flimbimflimbimover 18 years ago
good build up

good build up and i think the details you give-- for example mentioning that the panties had no gusset-- really add to the story. i just hope in part three you get to fuck her.

DomJ69DomJ69over 4 years ago
Okay

Please use full stops. Your writing is erotic, but it would be even better if you used an editor.

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50 now and still feel like a horny little boy, love life and love to love.. happy to share my acheivements, my desires and my fantasies. Feedback is welcome either good or bad, however if you want to be rude and offensive please leave a name so I can address it, my work is mi...

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