by Thors_Fist
Your stories are so tight. Do you plot out your stories or do you just write from the seat of your pants? I don't mind the repetition as it gives me a chance to reminisce within a given episode. You have obviously lived a very full life.
Five big stars.
For people who haven't read the other stuff that I'm now retelling, it lets them know why things are the way they are. It would be a shame to just start reading and not know what the hell is going on and why. Thors_Fist.
First time thru. . . .Your dialogue writing is so excellent. A real strength. All the re - visiting of past events took too many words. DEAR AUTHOR, you do go on and on ! But ! I over look that and enjoy your excellent writing. So creative ! Liked treatment of EVELYN. 5 stars.
Bit of a cheat using the 'best memories' part and rehashing events from other stories, but also there were some beautiful pieces in this chapter. I loved the part where Sam takes Evelyn's hand kisses it, that is just a part of the exploration of Evelyn through this whole chapter and it was very well written.