All Comments on 'We are Friends!'

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BabblefishBabblefishalmost 15 years ago
Good start, but needs detail

What you have here is fine, but LOTS more detail would really send it to the next level. What did it feel like to be penetrated for the first time? What was the texture of his cock in your mouth? What kinds of emotions did you have before, during, and after. Did you see him again?

lilredcobralilredcobraalmost 15 years ago
Terrible

Not a very good story and not very well written. This sounded more like a Junior High School student describing their first time to a buddy. The build-up was short, the story was non-descriptive and the conclusion was flat. This was not exciting or fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ewww

Ha gayyyy

icefang4436icefang4436almost 11 years ago

At anonymous, um ya its gay, it is in the gay section for a reason is it not? Over all a good story, little rushed at the end though

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Please correspond with me at coxsman@rediffmail.com.we can take it from there.I am indian too

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved the story. Please write to me at coxsman@rediffmail.com

Write to me at coxsman@rediffmail.com. I really liked the story.

frog1965frog1965almost 5 years ago
Loved the story,

I have a friend I met here on lit and we've done the texting and talking on the phone like in the story. Planning to meet soon. Hope it works out like the characters in this story!

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I submitted my first story in 2008 and after a year or two, stopped writing erotica. Recently, I recovered this account and started submitting again. Back in 2008, I was 18 - now, I am 33. The stories I write now would reflect lived experience and I hope people would appreciat...