All Comments on 'We Need To Talk Ch. 02'

I enjoyed the first part but you really nailed it in Chapter 02. All three climbed out of the shit pit and are now walking on Roses. A simple reconnection may turn in a threeway love relationship with his ex-wife and sister-in-law. Looking forward to more of your stories.

Sorry missed and only hit a four and this damn thing wont let me re vote.

Would like to see one more chapter at least to round out the story.

Enjoyed the read and was beginning to think you had forgotten to continue .

Thanks for a good story.

Tom

jb7,

Great tale of waiting.

For the seeds sewn in life to grow, it doesn't always need tears and bullshit to bear fruit.... just the sunshine of your love.

Thanks for sharing on Lit. Do it again soon.

BW

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Really good story. Please continue.

Really a good story, very good characterization, believable in a fantasy sort of way.

i'm sure, only in fantasy land.

This is a marvelous story--I believe there are a lot of us that would enjoy your continuation of it.

Thanks,

Sam

I'm torn by this piece. On one hand, I feel this story should end right here. It's perfect. On the other hand, I want to see wher Chris and Sue go from here. Will Sue's dominate streak continue? Will she turn submissive for Chris? So much to think about. Ok, I'm done thinking ---please continue. Just please don't make us wait seven months for the next installment! The story's too good.

Like Sam, I suspect that there are many readers who would appreciate continuation of this story - count me amongst them.

YES, please continue on with this story

Very erotic sex in this chapter, especially with him doing both his new lover and his ex-wife at the same time.

Now that he has proposed to Sue, his life will be more complete again. He now has the woman that he has lusted over for so many years.

A very complex storyline in which the reader has the feeling of being a voyeur, looking from the outside and into the scene.

Thanks for the very good chapter.

I read stories like this as a break from the darker stuff I usually like. I found it a bit annoying when the women referred to their pussies as "lady". It was really hard to not stop reading when one called her pussy "vajayjay".

Five again.

REALLY liked this and looking forward to the conclusion!

fuck ellen to boost her self esteem???? you do NOT lose self esteem if a pervert rejects you. BTW ellen should have taken ricky boy to court so the world would know and ricky boy could bask in the admiration of the masses.....

A good story but I found the phrasiology difficult to follow.

I think that generally, we are all in agreement that you have to finish it, and it must be as good as the beginning! We understand what Chris wants, but if Ellen turns up pregnant because of what Sue asked him to do with Ellen, then the drama changes everything. Then there is Sue's sister Maggie that shows up, takes one look at Chris, and and starts her breeding campaign with a lie. As Ellen grows, Chris changes his mind about her, but how?? Come on, finish this one for us with a bang, or a bang, bang or a bang, bang, bang. Keep writing.

XYZ

A good story, nicely set up well written good character design, just feels that you got feed up with it at the end, should have taken it a bit more forward, left me hanging but I now only just seen that part 3 is here, please disregard the last point. ( an old record! )