by Britease
Funny and to the point....And he thought: "Free at last"...3*
Really like the whole "We need to talk" series. All well written, short and to the point. Most with a really clever twist. This one is great. Keep them coming. Hope you can continue finding additional topics / scenes to continue. 5 stars and thanks for posting.
in the words "I fooled you" TK U MLJ LV NV
But the issue I have is why would he be happy to be rid of his wife? Before she told him that she was cheating was the marriage bad? While I like quick hitters the one problem is that without more background we have no understanding of the circumstances leading up to the story. Still an okay story. I wonder what will happen when her solicitor says she was lying about her lover and was just lashing out at her husbands perceived cheating? Since he has no proof (and even a British Court would require more proof than a single I-phone recording) I wonder if they divorce and she got half? I wonder if she hired a PI and caught him in the act, had video proof, and she got MORE than half? So many questions. Maybe next time a longer story?
I fived it because it was silly, easy, and fun, but like OvertheFalls I felt a little squeamish about the marriage. He seemed to be happy. Didn't the discovery upset him at all?
Nice story, well advertised. Apparently the marriage was on the rocks for a while, now it's settled to the bottom.
Chilley
"We need to talk" This was hilarious, how wifey unknowingly confessed to her own cheating, while the husband was innocent. Good snapshot story! 5 *'s
love this story as it shows how some people can get all mixed up in what was said and what really happened. and it looks like she got what she really wanted in the end, no marriage
You have these down to a fine art. Throughly enjoyed this one. Thx
Nice twist with the Angela's. One of this author's smoother rides.
I know some people get tired of wives fucking up by going overboard with the revenge thing or the justification of their own cheating, but I can't help but enjoy them because almost every author that writes one of these twists the knife of irony in the slut's heart until she bleeds out.
on the "whisper" game. by the time you get all the way around the circle what the last person heard is not what the first person said.
thanks for the smile.
When some little cunt gets the legs cut off from under her. Take the bitch to the cleaners and then kick her skank penniless arse into the curb.
Keep em comming Britease
Having been involved and watching more than a few interrogations, most guilty people will talk themselves into trouble or even more trouble than not.... Hence the fifth amendment here in the US!
Slut wife calling husbands friend a slut, definitely pot calling the kettle black. But the wife got caught with her pants down so to speak.
Why was she in such a hurry to give away her advantage? A bit mysterious here!
As I left the room, the last thing I heard was Annie cursing quietly to herself. Perhaps she was upset that she'd let her tea go cold!
One of your stories that I somehow had missed. And it's such a classic, too!
by her desperate need to rub her husbands face in her adultery! weird, no desire to keep it secret or embarrassment about it. her desire to brag about it sure shows a clear lack of respect, expect her to lie about lovers endowment to further put hubby down.
A right cunt got what she deserves.
Short and sweet only timeline for his starting. who started cheat first
Was he doing it cause she got caught revenge or both cheaters and he smarter
Just the right length, a cheater is undone by her own words. Fun!
Any twelve -year-old could write this drivel, and perhaps did! If writing is this easy, let us all do it! One very generous star.
Writing is easy?
Then by all means show us your stuff - link here to tell us where it ended up.
'course, helpful comments might ensue....
Green-something
Hoisted by her own pet hard on boyfriend she mentioned. Loved it.
Nothing quite like Britease at his best, and this is one of his best.
Nice
It seems that I've read all the great tales on this site. This is one of them.
Ok that was altogether funny.
But both spouses cheated.
One was a bit smarter though.
Still...
Ok that fiction was funny.
This author always provides a nice contrast to the heavy stories that are the 'meat' of LW. This is his schtick, and nobody does it better!
from a cunt whore, arrogant mean evil and entitled to a lovely young new life. woo hoo!
Why does the innocent cheated on partner always move out? Maybe he can give her the house free and clear too? Is that not a standard lw author ingredient? Six months and no reprisal, he moves out and what?...
Maybe, he'll put a bun or two in Angie's oven, after he squashes her little outfit!
Husband is committing adultery as bad as Ann. There goes any benefit of the pre-nup, unless, of course, husband lies under oath.
Life goes better with humor and understanding what the hell you are talking about.
Why did he move out?.... Why do we always see the same stupid tropes from these writers?...
Hilarious! Your work at it's very best. Almost as good as Harddaysnight humorous stories. Thanks again.
HAHAHAHA!!! Wife fucking this guy then thinks he can't do anything cause he's sleeping around. Just to find the comments made & told to her was about a game of squash. And wifey totally demolished her marriage. 4 stars Bob
Excellent. How is it that you can put together such a complete story with so few words, so well, and most of the people in this website can't put a decent story together we're using a hundred times that...? Thank you.
The amount of tea consumed here left me a little nauseous (I've never understood my fellow Brits fixation with this brew) but it was a clever little story, all the more so because of it's brevity.
The worm has turned. Mike is much better off to shed that vindictive harlot. Nicely done.