- Loving Wives
- We Need to Talk, Vic
- Comments
All Comments on 'We Need to Talk, Vic'
by Britease
- 47 Comments
MitchFraellover 10 years agoIt's even better when you realise that 'Vic' is not necessarily his name. (For those who don't get it, it's his job.)
LostOneThereover 10 years agoI didn't take it seriously. Just didn't like it much. The writing itself was okay.
2 stars
tazmunover 10 years ago....but I had a hell of a good time laughing!
Rockyderek_caover 10 years agoWhat a fun short ! Quick to the solution .... Good to have a dark solution to the odd story here and there.
littlecordeleraover 10 years agoWhat the fuck is this comedy doing in Loving Wives? The only place I've seen a story with a husband and wife this fucking stupid was a skit done on Saturday Night Live.
Send me a PM. I'll try to explain what "loving wife" means.
jasonnhover 10 years agoShort enough not to get on my nerves. Unusual enough to be worth reading.
IronDragonover 10 years agoOk, in spite of the fact that Wifey didn't join her lovers six feet under, I STILL had to give this one credit. Dark comedy at its finest. Keep 'em coming, Brit. LOL
5 Stars.
betrayedbyloveover 10 years agoIt would have been better if you killed off the cheating whore cunt skank wife also. Now that's dark humor.
HA HA HA HA HA
betrayedbyloveover 10 years agoI just realized I said the same thing as ID. Oh well, great minds think alike.
Either that or insane minds think alike.
HA
CrisInGAover 10 years agoReminds me of that old joke where the Cops ask a guy in cuffs why he shot his wife and he says that it made more sense to shoot her than having to shoot a new guy every week.
rightbankover 9 years agono matter what she does, she is safe. If he wants it to change, he needs to change the equation, her.
stout1759over 9 years agoThere was a warning there for her. The bishop was doing the same thing. Then his wife had a shooting accident. I'd say she used up her good will.
impo_58over 9 years agoVery funny and entertaining like always....very good...
studebakerhawkabout 9 years ago...how many of us had to look up what the 6th and 7th commandments refer to.
Pappy7about 8 years agosaved a lot of bullets and just had a shooting accident of his own. Funny story, well written, of course.
cockcriticover 6 years agoCould have saved 2 bullets just shot the wife?
Definitely one not to take serious.
Schwanze1over 6 years agoa one. I'm going to have to go back through his stories and see if I've given him anything besides a one or a five.
MightyHornyabout 6 years agoHey, no sympathy for assholes who willingly bed married wives... but how about some punishment toward that slut Maddy?
Don't want to kill her too? Fine, but don't stupidly take her words for it about her newfound fidelity. Make sure, either physically or with psychological warfare, that you're seriously D-O-N-E with this shit!
Or, you know, divorce her.
Yeah, yeah - the church - whatever it is - looks done on divorce... but something tells me that mass murdering also isn't on their OK list. Just saying.
26thNCover 5 years agoI appreciate any story where the cheating partner is dealt with permanently. The cheating wife needs some consequences also.
Just_Wordsover 4 years agoI can't believe some of the readers took it seriously!
Anonymousover 4 years agoWhy not consider the 5th Commandment vs. the 6th Commandment? Or maybe just go for the 10th and call it a good start.
Don't want to reach the last of this series!
Jhbrown27over 4 years agoWell, what can he do? Maddie is hot. Casualties of a hot wife marriage!
Helen1899about 3 years agoJust brilliant, so funny, so well written. Half way through and I had no idea. Does anyone write this type of story better
Anonymous5 months agoI checked most of your stores and the reviews said sorry no sex. Why do you bother to out them on literotica.
Anonymous3 months agoI'm assuming the joke is that he kills the offender prior to his sermon? That's the only way I can see it making sense in regards to what everyone else is suggesting.
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