All Comments on 'We Needed a Vacation Ch. 01'

Good and imaginative. I'm impressed with your descriptions of the fucking and sucking. And I guess it's obvious but it's good that your characters are jealous free, makes for more fun.

Looking forward to more chapters. Five stars.

Thanks.

I enjoyed the story, the characters, and the descriptions; good job. What would have made this story even better wound be editing. Some spell checking, correcting after auto-correct had had its way with it, and fixing run on sentences would have improved this a lot.

I love these vacation stories.