All Comments on 'We Own a Legal Brothel! Ch. 04'

I generally like your story line although its starting to become unbeleivable. but its been fun.

I hate people who do this but...a couple of spelling and word useage are driving me crazy. its definately not defiantly a couple others can't rember just watch your word usage

Yeah! More!

Wimp watcher, black and white, double cocks in all the holes - gee the slut may never recover till the next chapter - so whats new?

Wrap up the wimp lover, girl friend slut soon as the plot line is getting tired and repetitive.

Great job with the extended story

I have not made comments on each chapter, but decided to let you know that I am enjoying this story. Keep up the good work, and wish I had a brothel.

Buy another vowel and quit writing stupid dirty stories.